[SOLO/RELIGION] The B. B. Warfield Collection, Volume 6 -ans

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annise wrote: April 14th, 2024, 7:57 pm OK- I'll set this up - back soon

Anne
Hi Anne, could you delete the final section for me? I decided it doesn't fit very well in the collection because it's by a different author.
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PL for Section 3 -
Just one little change needed.
6:27 "of" said for "is" in "since the result is an intelligent one".
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PL for Section 4
(1:30 "contemplation" said for "conception".)
8:41 "the" inserted in "accounts of miracles so numerous...."
9:21 "us" inserted in "it becomes surely, then, of sufficient importance..."
9:53 "beyond" said for "before" in "knowledge before the time of knowledge"
(10:40 - 10:42.5 slightly long pause?)
10:43 You introduce the next section just before the end ("Four: Special characteristics of the Bible")

[Pre-emptive note for section 5: you say "four" here where before you have used ordinals.]
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Spot checks with new timings for section 3 (14:27)
06:26 'of' said for 'is' in 'since the result is an intelligent one'.
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Section 3 PL OK!
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Spot checks with new timings for section 4 (10:53)
01:29 'contemplation' said for 'conception'.
08:40 'the' inserted in 'accounts of miracles so numerous....'
09:22 'us' inserted in 'it becomes surely, then, of sufficient importance...'
09:53 'beyond' said for 'before' in 'knowledge before the time of knowledge'
10:42 slightly long pause?
10:43 You introduce the next section just before the end 'Four: Special characteristics of the Bible'
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Section 4 PL OK!
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PL for Section 5:
0:39 "one only particular" said for "only one particular"
1:33 "practical and practical" said for "practical and practicable"
3:10 "which it contains" said for "which contains it".
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Section 6 PL OK!
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