[FULL] Titus Andronicus by William Shakespeare - kit

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 20th, 2024, 2:35 pm

Sorry about that. I'll fix it tomorrow.
Cheers

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » April 21st, 2024, 11:32 am

And right as Craig finishes his roles, I have finished mine; all of Aaron's lines are now ready for PL.

And if someone could PL my lines in 5.1 and 5.3, I'd appreciate it!

My goodness, what a piece of work that guy is! I can't remember the last time I played someone so abjectly evil. But was it fun? Of course.

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 21st, 2024, 11:35 am

WiltedScribe wrote: ↑April 21st, 2024, 11:32 am And right as Craig finishes his roles, I have finished mine; all of Aaron's lines are now ready for PL. And if someone could PL my lines in 5.1 and 5.3, I'd appreciate it!

My goodness, what a piece of work that guy is! I can't remember the last time I played someone so abjectly evil. But was it fun? Of course.

He is a nasty bit of work!!!

Post by **Kitty** » April 22nd, 2024, 12:54 am

Craigos wrote: ↑April 20th, 2024, 5:44 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/titusandronicus_martius_1_1.mp3

sorry, I missed this one, Craig. Only a pronunciation error in Martius:

> at 0:09: Not I, till Mutius’ bones be buried. - you say "Myoo-tee-us" instead of "Myoo-shous"
> at 0:17: No man shed tears for noble Mutius – also here

And now I realize, Titus was supposed to read the ALL line as well, but you forgot. Could you insert it with your angry Titus voice as well at about 10:06 in your titus_1_1 file please ? "No man shed tears for noble Mutius; He lives in fame that died in virtue’s cause."

Sorry for the oversight

Thanks

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » April 22nd, 2024, 1:06 am

WiltedScribe wrote: ↑April 21st, 2024, 11:32 amAnd if someone could PL my lines in 5.1 and 5.3, I'd appreciate it!

I checked both Aaron files and indeed, he is quite the unrepentant villain

Aaron 5_3 is PL ok.

One note for 5_1

> at 3:49: "beheld his tears" – I hear "chars"

could you check please ?

both files are a bit under 86 dB, but that will get adjusted anyway

thanks

Sonia

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 22nd, 2024, 3:04 am

I've updated the file with the errors in.
titus_5_3 - titus_1_1 - martius_1_1

aaron_4_2 PL Spot on!

Post by **Kitty** » April 22nd, 2024, 3:14 am

Craigos wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 3:04 amI've updated the file with the errors in.
titus_5_3 - titus_1_1 - martius_1_1

thank you, Craig, Titus now definitely PL ok.

With Martius you only corrected one spot, and forgot the first:

> at 0:09: Not I, till Mutius’ bones be buried.

Sonia

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 22nd, 2024, 3:23 am

Kitty wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 3:14 am
With Martius you only corrected one spot, and forgot the first:

> at 0:09: Not I, till Mutius’ bones be buried.

Sonia

Sorry technical error! Please don't kill me!

Reloaded.

Post by **Kitty** » April 22nd, 2024, 3:26 am

Craigos wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 3:23 amSorry technical error! Please don't kill me!

Tamora would never kill anybody (she has other people do it for her

)

But you're off the hook...it's PL ok now, thanks

Sonia

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 22nd, 2024, 3:31 am

aaron_2_1 also PLOK

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » April 22nd, 2024, 5:07 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 1:06 am
One note for 5_1

> at 3:49: "beheld his tears" – I hear "chars" could you check please ?

both files are a bit under 86 dB, but that will get adjusted anyway

thanks

Sonia

Thanks, Sonia! So, after listening back, I do know that I said "tears," but the accent I adopted for the character may have made it a bit unclear. If you think it's too unclear and the meaning is lost or hard to decipher, I could re-record that bit (the caveat being that I'm away from my microphone until the first week of May, so it's going to take a while to do it). Do let me know what you think!

Post by **Kitty** » April 22nd, 2024, 10:38 pm

WiltedScribe wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 5:07 pmThanks, Sonia! So, after listening back, I do know that I said "tears," but the accent I adopted for the character may have made it a bit unclear. If you think it's too unclear and the meaning is lost or hard to decipher, I could re-record that bit (the caveat being that I'm away from my microphone until the first week of May, so it's going to take a while to do it). Do let me know what you think!

I noticed the accent for this character and indeed some other words were hard to understand as well but I always thought, reading the text, that you meant the original word, giving you the benefit of the doubt in a few instances. This one here I really didn't understand as tears though. Maybe we could have another pair of ears listen to it.

What do the others think ?

Sonia

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » April 23rd, 2024, 10:35 am

Kitty wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 10:38 pm What do the others think ?

I think it's probably worth making a little clearer.

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » April 29th, 2024, 5:16 pm

Good news! I was able to get back to my microphone earlier than expected, so I re-did that small line in Aaron 5.1 and hopefully "tears" sounds clearer now.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/titusandronicus_aaron_5_1.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » April 29th, 2024, 10:52 pm

WiltedScribe wrote: ↑April 29th, 2024, 5:16 pmGood news! I was able to get back to my microphone earlier than expected, so I re-did that small line in Aaron 5.1 and hopefully "tears" sounds clearer now.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/titusandronicus_aaron_5_1.mp3

still a bit weird, but yes, now one can understand it

PL ok, thanks

Sonia