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[SOLO] The Animate And The Inanimate by William Sidis - tg
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Sections 8 and 9 PL OK
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I am not very knowledgeable about the progress humanity has made with cosmology in the past couple of centuries, but it is astonishing how far theoretical knowledge got without the help of computers.
I am not very knowledgeable about the progress humanity has made with cosmology in the past couple of centuries, but it is astonishing how far theoretical knowledge got without the help of computers.
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Section 10 is PL OK.
I will PL 11 tomorrow.
I will PL 11 tomorrow.
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Section 11 is PL OK!
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can you also spot check the repairs to the earlier sections?
can you also spot check the repairs to the earlier sections?
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Section 6 is PL OK!
Section 7 still needs a change.
Section 7 Spot PL:
middle of page 46
9:12
You say reserve - need reverse
needs to be in:
in the peculiarity of life is its ability to draw on more energy than the second law of thermodynamics would allow; that is, its ability, in some circumstances at least, to reverse that second law.
Section 7 still needs a change.
Section 7 Spot PL:
middle of page 46
9:12
You say reserve - need reverse
needs to be in:
in the peculiarity of life is its ability to draw on more energy than the second law of thermodynamics would allow; that is, its ability, in some circumstances at least, to reverse that second law.
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Section 12 PL Notes:
9:53
middle of p 77
Replace particulars with particles in
Universes are the particles that make up existence.
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19:27
middle p 82
You have said regular either by intent or it being said not clearly de facto.
You need to say instead:
This vibration should be irregular
9:53
middle of p 77
Replace particulars with particles in
Universes are the particles that make up existence.
___________-
19:27
middle p 82
You have said regular either by intent or it being said not clearly de facto.
You need to say instead:
This vibration should be irregular
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