alanmapstone wrote: ↑April 19th, 2024, 1:10 am
Stage Directions for Act 2 are Ready for PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_stagedirections_2.mp3
26.40
Sorry these have taken so long, I am getting a lot of headaches at present and so having to limit my screen time. Also the SD are turning out to be longer than I expected. :(
As it is likely that this act will need to be divided into two sections I have added at the end alternative intros/outros for this case.
If it is possible I would prefer the act to be divided between scenes 9 and 10 where there is a break in the dramatic action. Hopefully this will leave 2 sections both within the 74 minute maximum. If not we will need to think again.
Thank you Alan. Sorry to hear about the headaches.
Please don't overdo your Librivoxing - we can wait for a few days, but we could never find another Alan :0)
PL Notes
3:45 two missing stage directions: "[The KING keeps his eye steadfastly fixed on him." and
"[ALVA, coloring deeply, is about to speak."
6:45 "taking the page by the hand" you don't prefix this with "Carlos".
25:00 "they embrace" - I don't see this in the text
Best Regards,
Adrian