[COMPLETE] THE FAT AND THE THIN, BOOK THREE OF THE ROUGON-MACQUART CYCLE, BY EMILE ZOLA - brrot

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 14th, 2024, 1:22 pm

Section 11

Post by **brownrottger** » April 14th, 2024, 7:14 pm

Section 10
16:30 repeat "which he'd"
41:49 repeat "and"
52:16 repeat "who'd"

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 15th, 2024, 4:33 am

Ten, corrected

Post by **brownrottger** » April 15th, 2024, 1:44 pm

Section 10 is PL ok.
Section 11 just one note:
58:06 repeat "with ex"

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 15th, 2024, 2:16 pm

Twelve.
The story is excellent. But every time Zola veers into one of his famous descriptive passages, things don't go so well. The scene with the cheese--already laboring under the understood comparison to the "smell" of the gossiping women--collapses once he injects a second, musical metaphor.

Post by **brownrottger** » April 16th, 2024, 5:06 pm

Section 12 is PL ok.

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 17th, 2024, 6:53 am

A new, revitalized 11

Post by **brownrottger** » April 17th, 2024, 7:54 am

Section 11 is PL ok.

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 17th, 2024, 2:19 pm

Thirteen!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 18th, 2024, 9:35 am

Section 13:
33:59 repeat "and his h-"

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 18th, 2024, 10:47 am

13 has been cleaned up!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 18th, 2024, 10:51 am

Section 13 is now PL ok.

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 18th, 2024, 3:01 pm

Fourteen! and one to go

Post by **brownrottger** » April 18th, 2024, 6:17 pm

Section 14 is PL ok. I will fix the filename when cataloguing. Please double check your filename before uploading Section 15.
Thanks!
Christine

7A2c3Ml · Post by **7A2c3Ml** » April 20th, 2024, 12:57 pm

Fifteen! Let me know, of course, of any corrections, but I'll thank you now, for all your help!