I loved the poem, thank you so much. And your diction is very clear, I nearly understood everything
A lovely poem, read with feeling.
I do have a few PL notes however before this can be marked ok:
> the
background noise is a bit prominent, I would suggest one round of
noise cleaning
>
from 0:09 to 0:17: between intro and beginning of poem, this silence is much too long. I would suggest to
cutting down to less than 2 seconds
>
at 1:47: (p. 88/89) there are
three stanzas missing here: starting with "Adios Virxe d'Asuncion" and ending with ""Miña terra, adios, adios"
>
at the end: you nearly have 6 seconds instead of the
standard 5, so you could one second there as well
> also careful with the plosives, you have some very high peaks in some parts. If you are using Audacity, you can watch the audiowaves and when you see the red marked peaks, it's always best to re-record that line, taking care the voice is maybe a bit lower at these points. Nothing to correct this time, but it's a suggestion for future recordings.
Thank you
Sonia