(group) The Whole Family, by Various - lt

[Lynnet]

This sounds really interesting, do you still need a DPL? If so, sign me up!

Absolutely! Thank you.

[Lynnet]

I checked the fragment of section 4. Very nicely done. Clear recording and good pace.
When you upload the full section,please be sure to use the leading zero (_04_)

[Parkhi]

Thanks Lynnet, Since this is my first chapter as a narrator, I would like to share a small piece with you of the chapter to get your review instead of doing the whole chapter in one go. Pls, let me know if that's okay and where should I upload that piece?

This is not normal practice (that’s why we ask for the one minute test) but if you upload it to my folder I will listen. So go ahead and upload exactly as in the first post. When you submit the full chapter, it will overwrite the test piece.

Thanks Lynnet, I have uploaded a piece of 10:43 duration in your folder, here is the link: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/wholefamily_4_various_128kb.mp3 . I tested it with the Checker app and it passed all tests, do let me know if you have any more feedback.

Does this look okay Lynnet?

[Lynnet]

This is not normal practice (that’s why we ask for the one minute test) but if you upload it to my folder I will listen. So go ahead and upload exactly as in the first post. When you submit the full chapter, it will overwrite the test piece.

Thanks Lynnet, I have uploaded a piece of 10:43 duration in your folder, here is the link: https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/wholefamily_4_various_128kb.mp3 . I tested it with the Checker app and it passed all tests, do let me know if you have any more feedback.

Does this look okay Lynnet?

See the post above. It sounded good, but the file name is wrong.

[Parkhi]

I checked the fragment of section 4. Very nicely done. Clear recording and good pace.
When you upload the full section,please be sure to use the leading zero (_04_)

Sure, thanks a lot for the review!

[Parkhi]

Uploaded Full recording for section #4 here https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/wholefamily_04_various_128kb.mp3
Duration: 36:4

[Parkhi]

I would like to further claim section 6 : The Son in Law and section 7 : The married Son.

[Lynnet]

Uploaded Full recording for section #4 here https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/wholefamily_04_various_128kb.mp3
Duration: 36:4

Thank you

[ColleenMc]

Hi and welcome Parkhi!

All the technical specs for your recording check out.

I did hear a few stumbles and repetitions in the recording, as follows:

01:54 - small stumble “dreadful dead”

02:16 - small stumble “wants/wasn’t”

13:37 - repeated sentence

16:56 - text says “Peter”; I hear “Peggy”

19:30 - text says “Mrs. Temple”; I hear “Mr. Temple”

22:42 - text says “I”; I hear “she”

27:32 - text says “take”; I hear “make”

27:46 - text says “young man”; I hear “young girl”

34:07 - text says “Harry Goward”; I hear “Gary Howard”

Off to a good start! Post when the updated file is loaded and I will spot check..thanks!

Colleen

[ColleenMc]

Oops, forgot to update the window, hopefully this is visible now.

Colleen