[FULL] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

[VOvortex12]

Hello
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
Here is section 33
Time 1:35

PL notes for section 33:
the text is mostly correct and your recording passes Checker
but a few minor corrections are needed:
at 0.00 the opening silence should be 0.5 to 1 second
at 0.08 say Read for Librivox.org
at 1.16 the text is Well may we think but hear Well we may think
at 1.23 say End of poem rather than the title

Hello

Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3

File duration 1:24

[alanmapstone]

Here is section 32 with the requested revisions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_32_melville_128kb.mp3

Section 32 is now PL OK!
Congratulations on your first completed section

[alanmapstone]

Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
File duration 1:24

Section 33 is now also PL OK!
Well Done!

[VOvortex12]

Here is section 32 with the requested revisions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_32_melville_128kb.mp3

Section 32 is now PL OK!
Congratulations on your first completed section

Thank you Alan!!

[VOvortex12]

Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
File duration 1:24

Section 33 is now also PL OK!
Well Done!

Thank you! Thank you!

[silverquill]

Section 43 is PL OK

[alanmapstone]

Section 43 is PL OK

Thanks Larry
I have section 56 recorded but it is a long one so editing will take some time.
This project is getting close to completion.

[BobbyBreadshower]

Here is section 51. Please let me know if I need to make any changes.
2:54
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3

Hi
Thank you for your recording
It is well read and passes all the technical spec checks
Just a couple of PL notes on the text:
at 0.04 say Read for Librivox.org you left off the .org
at 0.39 the text is That culture which makes never wan but you pronounce wan as wain when it should be w-aa-n (meaning pale and lifeless)
otherwise ok!

I have now also assigned you section 52 which you also requested.

See below for the updated recording for section 51. Hopefully this one is all good!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3

Thank you for section 52 as well, I'll get started on that one now.

[alanmapstone]

See below for the updated recording for section 51. Hopefully this one is all good!
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3

Section 51 is now PL OK!
Well Done!

[BobbyBreadshower]

And here is section 52.

2:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_52_melville_128kb.mp3

Thank you!

[alanmapstone]

And here is section 52.
2:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_52_melville_128kb.mp3

PL OK!
Very well and clearly read!
Thank you

[alanmapstone]

Section 56 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16

This is a long one

[silverquill]

Section 56 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16

This is a long one

Glad to report this as PL OK
Good reading, Alan.

[alanmapstone]

Section 56 is Ready for PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16
This is a long one

Glad to report this as PL OK
Good reading, Alan.

Thanks Larry, you have been a great help on this project.
Only 4 sections to go

[Heather6542]

Hi all,
Section 47 is ready for PL. 1:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_47_melville_128kb.mp3

Please let me know if any changes need to be made,

Thank you,
Heather