[SOLO] The Welsh Wars of Edward The First - loa

[cavaet]

Section 2

Great reading. Just a few things I picked up. The missing line and the meaning changes are probably the only ones that need editing.

1:15 Missing line 'The men of the mountains fought in the gorilla fashion.'

9:42 I hear 'of Ludlow'
Reads 'to Ludlow'
Just a slight change in meaning.

13:09 I hear, 'did not aspire to independence'
Reads 'did not yet aspire to independence'

20:09 I hear '...an old Roman road lay along the coast'
Reads '...an old Roman road led along the coast'

23:41 I hear 'But while expiating...'
Reads 'But while extirpating...'
Change of meaning.

Ready for Spot PL

[Craigos]

Section 3

24:00 Lines in wrong order.
I hear: Brought them around the town, still out of sight, personally arrayed........
Reads: personally arrayed and.....,brought them around the town.....

[cavaet]

Section 3

24:00 Lines in wrong order.
I hear: Brought them around the town, still out of sight, personally arrayed........
Reads: personally arrayed and.....,brought them around the town.....

Fixed

[cavaet]

Sorry, back on this tomorrow

[lorda]

Hello cavaet,

are you all right?

You haven't been in this project for a while. Please get in touch and let us know about the current status of the project.

Greetings, Bernd