[SOLO-POETRY] Clarel by Herman Melville - icequeen

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » March 25th, 2024, 11:07 pm

Section 5 is ready for PL.

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » March 27th, 2024, 11:17 pm

Section 6 is ready for PL.

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 9th, 2024, 7:44 pm

Section 7 is ready for PL.

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 10th, 2024, 7:23 pm

Section 8 is ready for PL.

Post by **icequeen** » April 10th, 2024, 8:48 pm

I went ahead and PL'ed the first three sections. If someone comes along, they are more than welcome to join the project!

Section 000, 001 and 002 are all PL OK!

Post by **icequeen** » April 11th, 2024, 8:48 pm

Sections 3 and 4 are PL OK!

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 11th, 2024, 9:23 pm

Thank you!

These are shorter than I anticipated at first, so I tried doing several at once. Not too bad; maybe I'll try it again once in a while.

Sections 9-12 are ready for PL.

Post by **icequeen** » April 14th, 2024, 10:10 pm

Sections 5 and 6 are PL OK!

Section 7 has a repeat at 2:29-:35.

Post by **icequeen** » April 15th, 2024, 8:37 pm

Sections 8, 9 and 10 are PL OK!

Section 11 needs one fix. At 2:27 you say, "With crested forehead," this should be "With crescent forehead."

Section 12 is PL OK!

I'm going to be greedy. I will PL this project, you are doing a great job and I want to hear the whole thing!

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 17th, 2024, 6:54 pm

That's great news, thanks for your continuing effort.

Section 13 is ready for PL.

Sections 7 and 11 are ready for spot PL.

Post by **icequeen** » April 17th, 2024, 7:29 pm

Sections 7 and 11 are now PL OK!

Section 13 is also PL OK!

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 18th, 2024, 9:26 pm

Section 14 is ready for PL.

Post by **icequeen** » April 19th, 2024, 8:49 pm

Section 14 is PL OK!

mmunoz · Post by **mmunoz** » April 20th, 2024, 1:00 pm

Sections 15 and 16 are ready for PL.

Post by **icequeen** » April 22nd, 2024, 8:59 pm

Sections 15 and 16 are PL OK!