OPEN[Dramatic Reading] Christmas With Grandma Elsie-mas
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"There’s nothing stronger than the heart of a volunteer.” – Lt. Col. Jimmy Doolittle
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Captain Raymond chapter 1 is PL OK
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Captain Raymond Chapter 2 is PL OK
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Narrator chapters 1 and 2 are PL OK
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Mr Dinsmore Chapters 1, 2, 7, 13, 17 are all PL OK
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Narrator chapters 3 and 4 are PL OK
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
PL Notes for Mr Dinsmore Chapter 4
Missing line my apologies I did not highlight it for you in the file
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'MR DINSMORE
"The right to vote at elections, my son. You can see, can't you, what harm might come from it."
Missing line my apologies I did not highlight it for you in the file
0:48
'MR DINSMORE
"The right to vote at elections, my son. You can see, can't you, what harm might come from it."
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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On page 9 of 18 of Chapter 6 it is read as the following:
NARRATOR:
Baby Elsie was a merry, demonstrative little thing, and it was great fun for them all to watch her and hear her shouts of delight as she came upon one treasure after another;--tiny, gaily dressed dolls of both sexes, and other toys suited to her years.
It did not take her very long to empty the stocking, and then the captain said to the older ones, "Now you may close the door, my dears, and get yourselves dressed and ready for the duties and pleasures of the day. I shall be in presently for our usual chat before breakfast."
They made haste with their dressing and were quite ready for their father when he came in some half hour later. They were very light-hearted and gay and full of gratitude for all they had received.
Should the quote from the captain be a line for him instead of the narrator?
Thanks! Marie
NARRATOR:
Baby Elsie was a merry, demonstrative little thing, and it was great fun for them all to watch her and hear her shouts of delight as she came upon one treasure after another;--tiny, gaily dressed dolls of both sexes, and other toys suited to her years.
It did not take her very long to empty the stocking, and then the captain said to the older ones, "Now you may close the door, my dears, and get yourselves dressed and ready for the duties and pleasures of the day. I shall be in presently for our usual chat before breakfast."
They made haste with their dressing and were quite ready for their father when he came in some half hour later. They were very light-hearted and gay and full of gratitude for all they had received.
Should the quote from the captain be a line for him instead of the narrator?
Thanks! Marie
Marie Christian
Hi Mariemariechristian wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 4:06 pm On page 9 of 18 of Chapter 6 it is read as the following:
NARRATOR:
Baby Elsie was a merry, demonstrative little thing, and it was great fun for them all to watch her and hear her shouts of delight as she came upon one treasure after another;--tiny, gaily dressed dolls of both sexes, and other toys suited to her years.
It did not take her very long to empty the stocking, and then the captain said to the older ones, "Now you may close the door, my dears, and get yourselves dressed and ready for the duties and pleasures of the day. I shall be in presently for our usual chat before breakfast."
They made haste with their dressing and were quite ready for their father when he came in some half hour later. They were very light-hearted and gay and full of gratitude for all they had received.
Should the quote from the captain be a line for him instead of the narrator?
Thanks! Marie
Thank you for spotting that yes you are correct that is a line for the captain. I have now amended that thanks again much appreciated.
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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You're welcomewib66 wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 4:05 amHi Mariemariechristian wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 4:06 pm On page 9 of 18 of Chapter 6 it is read as the following:
NARRATOR:
Baby Elsie was a merry, demonstrative little thing, and it was great fun for them all to watch her and hear her shouts of delight as she came upon one treasure after another;--tiny, gaily dressed dolls of both sexes, and other toys suited to her years.
It did not take her very long to empty the stocking, and then the captain said to the older ones, "Now you may close the door, my dears, and get yourselves dressed and ready for the duties and pleasures of the day. I shall be in presently for our usual chat before breakfast."
They made haste with their dressing and were quite ready for their father when he came in some half hour later. They were very light-hearted and gay and full of gratitude for all they had received.
Should the quote from the captain be a line for him instead of the narrator?
Thanks! Marie
Thank you for spotting that yes you are correct that is a line for the captain. I have now amended that thanks again much appreciated.
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This is now PL OK thank yousilverquill wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 2:35 pmHere you go!
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/christmas_mrdinsmore_4.mp3
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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