Both are PL OK
0:00: Before you say the section title ('The Story of the Daisies'), you need to include the intro text listed in the first post: "Section 6 of Harper's Young People, Volume 1, Issue 39, July 27, 1880. This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information or to volunteer, please visit librivox.org. Harper's Young People, Volume 1, Issue 39, July 27, 1880." Also, the opening silence should be '0.5 to 1 second'.
1:52: "a gray-haired minister, a crowded church" should be "a gray-haired minister in a crowded church"
1:56: This long gap could be shortened
2:01: I'm hearing "was arrayed like one of those... these"
2:12: Failed take between "They go to a large city" and "where nothing is seen" that should be edited out
2:22: 'trampling' in "and the ringing of bells, and the trampling...tramping of horses" should be edited out
3:13: 'trowel' in "with a trowel in his hand" is pronounced to rhyme with 'towel' (
TROU-uhl), not 'bowl'
3:49: "but the end of a row blooming plants" should be "but at the end of a row of blooming plants"
4:06: 'misshapen' in "because one of his feet was sadly misshapen" is 'mis-shapen', not 'miss-hapen', so pronounced
'mis-SHEY-puhn'
4:09: Failed take of "and in him arms he carried" which should be edited out
4:21: I'm hearing "the man said called, cheerily" rather than "the man called, cheerily"
5:50: Failed take of "The floor of this room was bare" which should be edited out
6:48: "and a piece of paper on which a rude attempt at a painting of a bunch of daisies" should be "and a piece of paper on which was a rude attempt at a painting of a bunch of daisies"
7:59: There's some sort of computer chime in the middle of "To-day's your birthday: thirteen years old", probably a good idea to re-record this sentence.
7:59: Failed take of "she was" between "and soon as" and "he was gone" which should be edited out
8:29: Long gap which should be edited out
9:36: "On floor and shelves they bloomed in cracked pinchers" should be "On floor and shelves they bloomed in cracked pitchers"
9:42: Two failed takes here that should be edited out.
10:09: Failed take of "For three months long" should be edited out
10:33: Failed take of 'painter' between "And the young flower" and "painter growing stronger" should be edited out
10:42: You need to include the outro text listed in the first post: "End of section 6." You also need '5 seconds of silence at the end'
One other thing to note: the file name should be 'hyp39_06_various_128kb.mp3', again, as listed in the first post. It's also typical that you post the track length when you post it here, to make it easier to add to the Magic Window.
For future reference, when you submit a recording, it's supposed to be what you believe to be the finished recording, with any errors edited out. My job as DPL is to just double check there's nothing wrong.
