COMPLETE Betty Wales Freshman by Margaret Warde - rr

[thechapterbrook]

One comment for chapter 8:

16:41 should be "off day" not "day off" in "It will suppose I had an off day.”

Chapters 9, 10, 11, and 12 are all PL OK.

Excellently read, as usual.

M

Thank you! Chapter 8 is fixed and uploaded!

[thechapterbrook]

Chapter 14 is PL OK.

Chapter 15, one comment as I do not know whether this is significant later or not. I didn't want to have it crop up later and contradict what was here.

15:45 should be "the goals are three to two" not "three to four"

Enjoyed the basketball game - such low scores - I wonder how long the game was and how the rules compare with today.

I really like your portrayal of Betty. I think you have her down just right in terms of the youthful enthusiasm, etc.

M

Thank you for the catch! Scores are probably important lol! I have updated that. Thank you for the Betty compliment. I love Betty!

[thechapterbrook]

Two more excellent chapters in 16 and 17.

One small change required in chapter 16:
please add about 0.5 seconds of silence to the start so there is between 0.5 and 1 second of silence

Chapter 17 is PL OK.
Really loved the bird hunt.

Thanks,

M

Chapter 16 has been updated!
That bird hunt was funny! What is even more funny is that I flipped through the chapter before I read it, looking for any words I might need to look up to pronounce. I spent way too long looking up those bird names that weren't real! So the girls had a joke on me as well!

[thechapterbrook]

What a cliffhanger that chapter about Eleanor was. And how nice of Betty to make the boarding decision she did at the end of the year.

Three excellently read chapters. Chapters 18, 19, and 20 are all PL OK.

Thanks for the opportunity to listen to this book. I really enjoyed your reading of it, and I am glad to see you are reading the next one.

M

You really grow to love Eleanor!
Thank you so much for editing! I really appreciate it! I should start uploading on the next tomorrow! Onward to Sophomore year!

[mleigh]

What a cliffhanger that chapter about Eleanor was. And how nice of Betty to make the boarding decision she did at the end of the year.

Three excellently read chapters. Chapters 18, 19, and 20 are all PL OK.

Thanks for the opportunity to listen to this book. I really enjoyed your reading of it, and I am glad to see you are reading the next one.

M

You really grow to love Eleanor!
Thank you so much for editing! I really appreciate it! I should start uploading on the next tomorrow! Onward to Sophomore year!

Looking forward to the sophomore year.

What new things will the girls be up to?

M

[mleigh]

Two more excellent chapters in 16 and 17.

One small change required in chapter 16:
please add about 0.5 seconds of silence to the start so there is between 0.5 and 1 second of silence

Chapter 17 is PL OK.
Really loved the bird hunt.

Thanks,

M

Chapter 16 has been updated!
That bird hunt was funny! What is even more funny is that I flipped through the chapter before I read it, looking for any words I might need to look up to pronounce. I spent way too long looking up those bird names that weren't real! So the girls had a joke on me as well!

Love your story. So funny. I have to remember to ask my husband if he has seen any of those birds.

[mleigh]

All the remaining chapters are PL OK.

Congratulations on a book well read and entertaining as well.

Thanks,

M

[redrun]

This audio book is now complete. All audio files can be found in our catalog:
https://librivox.org/betty-wales-freshman-by-margaret-warde-2/

Yes, and congratulations on your first solo recording!

[thechapterbrook]

All the remaining chapters are PL OK.

Congratulations on a book well read and entertaining as well.

Thanks,

M

Yay! Thank you for all your help!

[thechapterbrook]

This audio book is now complete. All audio files can be found in our catalog:
https://librivox.org/betty-wales-freshman-by-margaret-warde-2/

Yes, and congratulations on your first solo recording!

Yay! Thank you so much! I'm so excite to officially be part of the community!