[COMPLETE] Shadowland: September, 1919 by Various - tg

[elsieselwyn]

submitted for your approval. Shadowlands section 12

duration: 9:01

Thanks

don

You forgot the link, but I think it's this: https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_12_various_128kb.mp3 Right?

[PeeWeeVO007]

Right! Sorry

don

[PeeWeeVO007]

This may be redundant, but here is section 12 again with the attachment

Duration 9:01

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_12_various_128kb.mp3

Thanks again for all the help

don warren

[elsieselwyn]

Hi there

My only PL Note for assembly of lines is that the group line is missing two of its "unpardonables", starting at 15:51, we should have:

"unpardonable . . . (missing unpardonable) . . . absolutely (missing unpardonable) . . . completely unpardonable"

I think it is intentional that the playwright put in so many, so we should have them all. If they're missing in the group line, you could always copy/paste from what is there now, could even use gentle pitch change to vary it up if needed.

I forgot to ask if you want constructive notes as well? If so, here are two ideas; if not, ignore the following.

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I think it would enhance the listening experience of someone who's not also reading the text to have longer pauses ahead of most of the stage directions.

And there is a pretty substantial loudness difference between the Roger and Sheila or Therese lines here and there while you're listening. It would polish this play up super nicely if the Roger lines could be "de-amplified" a smidge and Sheila's and Therese's amplified a bit where they are very soft.

I implemented your constructive notes and added in the extra unpardonables. Since adding in some space before the stage directions shifted things a bit, you should look at 16:15 to find the unpardonable lines


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_09_various_128kb.mp3

[elsieselwyn]

This may be redundant, but here is section 12 again with the attachment

Duration 9:01

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_12_various_128kb.mp3

Thanks again for all the help

don warren

Section 12 is PL OK

[LCaulkins]

Hey, Elsie, caught me on a work trip. I can do the check of the play on Monday evening

[elsieselwyn]

Hey, Elsie, caught me on a work trip. I can do the check of the play on Monday evening

Ok! No rush!

[adr6090]

Hello!!
I have my claim recorded now I need to finalize it and post. Just letting you know.

[elsieselwyn]

Hello!!
I have my claim recorded now I need to finalize it and post. Just letting you know.

Ok, sounds good!

[Bill Mosley]

Howdy from Texas!

Here's

14 The Age of Propaganda by Hudson Maxim

17:24

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_14_various_128kb.mp3


Got it done some time ago, but just now got back to it for post-production.

[LCaulkins]

Oooo! That's the ticket! The play polished up very nicely, indeed.

Section 9 PL OK

[elsieselwyn]

Howdy from Texas!

Here's

14 The Age of Propaganda by Hudson Maxim

17:24

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shadowlandseptember1919_14_various_128kb.mp3


Got it done some time ago, but just now got back to it for post-production.

Thanks!

[elsieselwyn]

Oooo! That's the ticket! The play polished up very nicely, indeed.

Section 9 PL OK

Great!

[elsieselwyn]

Hey Tricia!

Since the play is complete, I made the cast list. Would you mind adding it to the project's summary on the backend?

Cast List of The Height of Indiscretion
Narrator: Larry Wilson
Sheila: dckabir
Roger: Greg Giordano
Thêrese: Winnifred Assmann
Effie Letterman: Lindsay Ann Cameron
Miss Ney Vada: Lynette Caulkins
The Ingenue: Agnes Robert Behr
Voice 1: Elsie Selwyn
Voice 2: Bill Mosley

[TriciaG]

I can, but this is in forum formatting code rather than html.

Please use the cast coder to get the html: https://ia600702.us.archive.org/31/items/LibrivoxM4bCollectionAudiobooks/CastCoder.html