Thank you for section 6! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed your expressive reading style. Here are my PL notes:
- At 3:00, "
How would you like me to start acting up like a continental male at this moment," I hear "
Why would you like me to start acting up like a continental male at this moment" (p. 65)
- At 4:38, "Meanwhile
you just lived on and there was nothing to it," I hear "Meanwhile
she just lived on and there was nothing to it" (p. 65)
- At 6:22, "Then she gathered her defiance, and looked at him," I don't quite hear all of "defiance" (p. 67)
- At 7:16, "Then more sobs, but
subduing," I hear "Then more sobs, but
so doing" (p. 68)
- At 9:23, "the
spoilt, false little female," I hear "the
spot, false little female" (p. 69)
- At 9:27, "The keeper
saluted in silence," I hear "The keeper
slithered in silence" (p. 69)
- At 11:01, "and
I don't think they're two as'd hit it off very easy," I hear "and
I'll think they're two as'd hit it off very easy" (p. 70)
- At 11:51, "
heartily relieved to get away from the contact," I hear "
hardly relieved to get away from the contact" (p. 71)
- At 13:18, "In the very
experience of the nothingness of life," you say "In the very
existence of the nothingness of life" (p. 71)
- At 13:56, "
and say finally: So that's
that!" I hear "
or say finally: So that's
that!" (p. 72)
- At 16:46, "
That seemed the simplest solution of the otherwise insoluble," I hear "
It seemed as simple a solution of the otherwise insoluble" (p. 73)
- At 21:45, "In the little yard two paces
beyond her," I hear "In the little yard two paces
behind her" (p. 76)
- At 22:28, "She saw the clumsy breeches slipping down over the
pure, delicate, white loins," you say "She saw the clumsy breeches slipping down over the
pale, delicate, white loins" (p. 76)
- At 23:03, "But
with her mind she was inclined to ridicule," I hear "But her mind she was inclined to ridicule" (p. 77)
- At 25:15, "His eyes were smiling again, a little mockingly," I don't quite hear "again" (p. 78)
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah