[COMPLETE]Love's Labour's Lost by William Shakespeare - kit

[WiltedScribe]

Thank you, Jenn! That means all our roles are now in and we can proceed with editing the remaining scenes.

[jennlea]

The following parts are all PL-OK!
King 1.1
Holofernes 5.1
Nathaniel 5.1
Armado 5.1


And here is the edited 1.1 scene:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_1_1.mp3
19:09

[WiltedScribe]

Thank you again, Jenn! I just checked Dull 5.1 and can give a quick PL OK, so all the files in that scene are good to go!

[jennlea]

Thank you again, Jenn! I just checked Dull 5.1 and can give a quick PL OK, so all the files in that scene are good to go!

Perfect, thanks! With any luck I’ll have 5.1 edited in the next few days

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_princess_5_2.mp3

great, what a sweet but mischievous princess you are. And I love the accent

There were a few scenes that you missed completely, so here are the lines that need to be added still. Could you please record them all in a new file, please, as I have already started to cut up your file for the final assembly ?

some missed lines:
> Honey, and milk, and sugar; there is three.
> Seventh sweet, adieu: Since you can cog, I’ll play no more with you.
> Let it not be sweet.
> Gall! bitter.
> Twenty adieus, my frozen Muscovits.
> Are these the breed of wits so wonder’d at?
> The conqueror is dismay’d. Proceed, good Alexander.
> Stand aside, good Pompey.

two edits (just put them in the same file as the added lines):
> This pert Biron was out of countenance quite. – you say "constenance"
> challenge me by these deserts – desert should be stressed on the last syllable, it means "merits" not "sandy region"

thanks, glad to see this is in the end phase now. We may just finish it for this year still.

Sonia

[jennlea]

Here is the edited 5.1:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_5_1.mp3
10:28

I should be able to attend to the Princess corrections this evening!

[jennlea]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_princess_5_2.mp3

great, what a sweet but mischievous princess you are. And I love the accent

There were a few scenes that you missed completely, so here are the lines that need to be added still. Could you please record them all in a new file, please, as I have already started to cut up your file for the final assembly ?

some missed lines:
> Honey, and milk, and sugar; there is three.
> Seventh sweet, adieu: Since you can cog, I’ll play no more with you.
> Let it not be sweet.
> Gall! bitter.
> Twenty adieus, my frozen Muscovits.
> Are these the breed of wits so wonder’d at?
> The conqueror is dismay’d. Proceed, good Alexander.
> Stand aside, good Pompey.

two edits (just put them in the same file as the added lines):
> This pert Biron was out of countenance quite. – you say "constenance"
> challenge me by these deserts – desert should be stressed on the last syllable, it means "merits" not "sandy region"

thanks, glad to see this is in the end phase now. We may just finish it for this year still.

Sonia

Thank you, Sonia for the kind words

I was completely off my game with this part it seems

Anywho, here is a file with the missing lines and edits. I put the two edits at the end but let me know if there is a place you'd rather them go.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_princess_5_2_corrections.mp3

[Kitty]

Anywho, here is a file with the missing lines and edits. I put the two edits at the end but let me know if there is a place you'd rather them go.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_princess_5_2_corrections.mp3

thank you, all is PL ok now, and I put the remaining lines in the correct spots.

Here is the finished scene 5.2.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_5_2.mp3
Recording time: 1:01:21

Tomas can stitch Act 5 together Luckily it will stay just under our accepted maximum of 74 min.
Act 3 only seems to be one scene, so that one is ready for finall grooming as well.

I will stay available for the final PL of the finished acts.

Sonia

[ktaylor07]

Dull for Act 1.2 is now PL-OK

Here is the scene: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_1_2.mp3

[WiltedScribe]

Thank you, everyone! It looks like I have to start getting to work finalizing the acts. I shall try to make a start this weekend!

[Craigos]

Princess 2_1
Minor corrections.
Separate file maybe.


3:45 Text reads: We arrest your word. Boyet, you can produce acquittances
I Hear : We arrest your word. Boyet, you can produce acquaintances.

4:30 Missing Line: Your reason?

Very minor, but maybe add them to the same file.

2.00 Text : We bend to that the working of the heart;
: We bend that the working of the heart


2:56 Text :Break up this capon
:Break open this capon

3:38 Text : To whom shouldst thou give it?
: To whom shall thou give it?


Cheers

[WiltedScribe]

Finally edited together 4.2! Now to begin finalizing the acts that are ready.

Just two more scenes left to edit (albeit one is waiting for Jenn's corrections)! We're getting so close!

[jennlea]

So sorry for all the Princess mistakes

Here are the corrections for her:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_princess_2_1_corrections.mp3

ETA- the file contains all the suggested fixes

[Craigos]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_2_shakespeare_128kb.mp3 17:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_4_shakespeare_128kb.mp3 11:27

[WiltedScribe]

Thank you, Craig! Act finalization will now commence now that all editing has been completed!! A catalogue date before Christmas is all but assured now