PL OK. Very seamless editing. I may seem a little brusque when I make my comments but everyone makes mistakes when recording you will make fewer and fewer as you continue to recordtac107 wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2023, 8:22 amSection 34 PL Notes:nicholashillier wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 12:47 pm Here are the two sections I claimed earlier:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/gulliverstravels_34_swift_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/gulliverstravels_39_swift_128kb.mp3
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As with the previous section, the section title is "Part 4, Chapter 7" not "Section 34"
1:12 stumble on "opened my eyes and enlarged my understanding"
~2:02 the paragraph begins with "Let me deal so candidly with the reader" heard "To let me so candidly with the reader"
3:25 repeated the word "curiosity"
5:19 this pause between paragraphs feels extremely long
7:26 stumble on "miscarried"
8:39 multiple repeats on "would neither eat nor sleep" and that sentence
12:28 slight stumble on "how far this might be applicable"
At the end it should be "End of Part 4, Chapter 7"
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Phew!
I still need to go over the last chap again - will see if I can salvage it otherwise I'll re-record.
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I still need to go over the last chap again - will see if I can salvage it otherwise I'll re-record.
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May I claim sections 30, 31, 32 and 33? Thanks
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Since it's unclaimed (I think) - I would like to claim Section 35 too please.
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It's yours. Thanks,nicholashillier wrote: ↑November 24th, 2023, 6:55 am Since it's unclaimed (I think) - I would like to claim Section 35 too please.
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Section 27 (Pt. 3, Ch 11) attached, in 8:22:
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Unless I am deceived, the author made a mistake! OR it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general. He left Japan soon after June, 1709, rounded the Cape of Good Hope and arrived in Amsterdam on 16th of April (Year unspecified, but must be 1710 at least). THEN inexplicably, (without reversing the rotation of the earth) sets out from Amsterdam for England on 10th of April, 1710!. I'm going to assume it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general, as I don't think a mind like his would miss this...and it's just slightly buried in the text. Gotta be!
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Unless I am deceived, the author made a mistake! OR it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general. He left Japan soon after June, 1709, rounded the Cape of Good Hope and arrived in Amsterdam on 16th of April (Year unspecified, but must be 1710 at least). THEN inexplicably, (without reversing the rotation of the earth) sets out from Amsterdam for England on 10th of April, 1710!. I'm going to assume it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general, as I don't think a mind like his would miss this...and it's just slightly buried in the text. Gotta be!
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I'll update the MW in a sec.BrizeCrize wrote: ↑November 24th, 2023, 11:50 am Section 27 (Pt. 3, Ch 11) attached, in 8:22:
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Unless I am deceived, the author made a mistake! OR it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general. He left Japan soon after June, 1709, rounded the Cape of Good Hope and arrived in Amsterdam on 16th of April (Year unspecified, but must be 1710 at least). THEN inexplicably, (without reversing the rotation of the earth) sets out from Amsterdam for England on 10th of April, 1710!. I'm going to assume it's a subtle dig at inaccurate histories in general, as I don't think a mind like his would miss this...and it's just slightly buried in the text. Gotta be!
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Odd... I wonder why that happened.
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Looking back in this topic, I don't see that you sent any link. Would you please resend it?
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This is ready for PL review.
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Sorry you didn't see this in the earlier thread but hopefully this will come through for you.
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This is ready for PL review.
15:33
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Sorry you didn't see this in the earlier thread but hopefully this will come through for you.
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PL OKnicholashillier wrote: ↑November 24th, 2023, 6:52 am Section 39:
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PL Notes:Maxim wrote: ↑November 24th, 2023, 9:49 am New Version
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0:19 the section title is "Part 2, Chapter 4" not "Section 12"
2:20 repeat of "which" in "which the common people feed on heartily"
4:56 longish pause
Needs "End of Part 2, Chapter 4" and five seconds of silence on the end
The volume is appropriate on this one. Much better!
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