[COMPLETE] Multilingual Short Works Collection 035 - Poetry & Prose - thw

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ah Rimbaud, I love his poetry :9: a nice choice, thank you. And I didn't know you also speak French. I would be tempted to recruit you for our mini play in La Lecture. We still need some male roles filled, mostly short ones. Every voice helps :help: In case you are interested check out section 79 here: viewtopic.php?t=99561

For your poem, nicely recited, only a few instances where the pronunciation is a bit off and hard to understand:

> at 0:13: "E blanc" - I hear "OU blanc"
> at 0:15: "U vert" - also here "OU" instead of French "U"
> at 0:48: "les ivresses pénitentes" - you say "abresses"
> at 1:01: "aux grands fronts" - you say "rond", I don't hear the initial 'g'
> the background noise is quite distracting here, I would definitely recommend a round of noise cleaning, or maybe you sent the unedited version by mistake ?

thank you !

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Kitty wrote: November 2nd, 2023, 5:51 am
ah Rimbaud, I love his poetry :9: a nice choice, thank you. And I didn't know you also speak French. I would be tempted to recruit you for our mini play in La Lecture. We still need some male roles filled, mostly short ones. Every voice helps :help: In case you are interested check out section 79 here: viewtopic.php?t=99561

For your poem, nicely recited, only a few instances where the pronunciation is a bit off and hard to understand:

> at 0:13: "E blanc" - I hear "OU blanc"
> at 0:15: "U vert" - also here "OU" instead of French "U"
> at 0:48: "les ivresses pénitentes" - you say "abresses"
> at 1:01: "aux grands fronts" - you say "rond", I don't hear the initial 'g'
> the background noise is quite distracting here, I would definitely recommend a round of noise cleaning, or maybe you sent the unedited version by mistake ?

thank you !

Sonia
Hi, I hope you had a good vacation.

I think we discussed French somewhere back in the day, I am learning it, I dont really know it much.

The play sounds nice, this is my first french venture, maybe I will be doing more in the future from this inception. However, currently I am preping for ielts which is on 10th november, the test designed in such a tricky way, that it's destined to make you feel miserable regardless of your level of English and I have been recorging 4 essays for Harvard classics series, where you also contributed, they are some of the largest recording I ever did and I learned new things with this stretch, but I am not finished with that project, so I cant get into newer projects now. Maybe after 10th November, will see.


Regarding the correction, I always suffered with the "Grand" sound. I tried my best, I dont think I can make it any better. If it doesnt work. I will have to put down recording french :?



https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_voyelles_rimbaud_ehs_128kb.mp3
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ehsanesque wrote: November 3rd, 2023, 3:35 amI am not finished with that project, so I cant get into newer projects now. Maybe after 10th November, will see.
yes whenever you feel ready, don't stress yourself :)
Regarding the correction, I always suffered with the "Grand" sound. I tried my best, I dont think I can make it any better.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_voyelles_rimbaud_ehs_128kb.mp3
hm I still don't hear the 'g'. In fact it's the same sound (/gr/) than in English "grand", "great, "green", "groceries"...do you have trouble with that as well ?

Nevertheless, I think we can accept it for the collection, it's only a small thing. The other edits were well done. So: PL ok.

Only the background noise was still enormous. I cleaned it up myself this time and reuploaded, nnow it sounds better. What exactly are you doing to noise clean ? Are you using Audacity ?

And as for IELTS: good luck. I agree, those tests are mega tricky, and would challenge even native speakers to pass with good marks. :?

Thanks

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Kitty wrote: November 3rd, 2023, 4:25 am
ehsanesque wrote: November 3rd, 2023, 3:35 amI am not finished with that project, so I cant get into newer projects now. Maybe after 10th November, will see.
yes whenever you feel ready, don't stress yourself :)
Regarding the correction, I always suffered with the "Grand" sound. I tried my best, I dont think I can make it any better.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_voyelles_rimbaud_ehs_128kb.mp3
hm I still don't hear the 'g'. In fact it's the same sound (/gr/) than in English "grand", "great, "green", "groceries"...do you have trouble with that as well ?

Nevertheless, I think we can accept it for the collection, it's only a small thing. The other edits were well done. So: PL ok.

Only the background noise was still enormous. I cleaned it up myself this time and reuploaded, nnow it sounds better. What exactly are you doing to noise clean ? Are you using Audacity ?

And as for IELTS: good luck. I agree, those tests are mega tricky, and would challenge even native speakers to pass with good marks. :?

Thanks

Sonia

Wow! I just realized something. I pronounce English "grand" fine. But I just realize during French pronunciation I use the same tongue position for both g and r haha but in English g sound is pronounced with slight outer part from the throat while the r sound is near to the uvula. I will practice this, thanks.

Oh heck, I actually forgot to do a hiss reduction filter. I use Adobe Audition. Sorry for the trouble.

Thanks again for the conversation
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ehsanesque wrote: November 3rd, 2023, 7:50 amWow! I just realized something. I pronounce English "grand" fine. But I just realize during French pronunciation I use the same tongue position for both g and r haha but in English g sound is pronounced with slight outer part from the throat while the r sound is near to the uvula. I will practice this, thanks.
definitely, if you can say an English "gr" you should also be able to say the French "gr", for all intents and purposes it's the same.

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it's been a bit quiet in here, so let me bump this up with a very popular song in Luxembourgish. Every kid learns this one in school here. It's a poem by Michel Lentz, set to music by Laurent Menager (1835-1902) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Laurent_Menager

"D'Margrétchen", by Michel Lentz
Text: https://viewer.eluxemburgensia.lu/ark:70795/wn3g2w/pages/57/articles/DTL2488?search=%2alentz
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_margetchen_lentz_ss_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:41 min.
Keywords: flowers, spring, love, nature, song

As always, Sandra will come by soon and PL it for me.

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Kitty wrote: November 24th, 2023, 9:49 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_margetchen_lentz_ss_128kb.mp3
As always, Sandra will come by soon and PL it for me.
So beautiful!! :9: And no mistake, it's PL ok. :)
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Great! I've updated the MW.

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catharmaiden wrote: November 24th, 2023, 11:21 am
Kitty wrote: November 24th, 2023, 9:49 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_margetchen_lentz_ss_128kb.mp3
As always, Sandra will come by soon and PL it for me.
So beautiful!! :9: And no mistake, it's PL ok. :)
thank you, glad you enjoyed it.

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Kitty wrote: November 24th, 2023, 9:49 am it's been a bit quiet in here, so let me bump this up with a very popular song in Luxembourgish. Every kid learns this one in school here. It's a poem by Michel Lentz, set to music by Laurent Menager (1835-1902) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Laurent_Menager

"D'Margrétchen", by Michel Lentz
Text: https://viewer.eluxemburgensia.lu/ark:70795/wn3g2w/pages/57/articles/DTL2488?search=%2alentz
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_margetchen_lentz_ss_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:41 min.
Keywords: flowers, spring, love, nature, song

As always, Sandra will come by soon and PL it for me.

Sonia

Geez! How many languages do you know? :shock:
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ehsanesque wrote: December 12th, 2023, 9:16 pmGeez! How many languages do you know? :shock:
well Luxembourgish is my mother-tongue, so that one is not a feat for me :mrgreen: I would call myself fluent in German, English and French and still remember enough of my Italian studies to be able to participate in projects...some other languages are negotiable, I can PL them, but I wouldn't really consider myself good enough to record in those languages.

I love language learning. 8-) Currently busy with Russian grammar.

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Something short this time, to ease my way back into recording after almost 2 months :roll:

Author: Jan Kochanowski
Title: Na zdrowie
Duration 1:00
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_na_zdrowie_kochanowski_pn81_128kb.mp3
Source: poem starts at https://pl.wikisource.org/wiki/Strona:Klejnoty_poezji_staropolskiej_(red._Baumfeld).djvu/288 and continues on the next page
Publication date of the source text: 1919. (Title page to be found at https://pl.wikisource.org/wiki/Klejnoty_poezji_staropolskiej) (this is a massive anthology of Polish pre-19th century poetry, so I may decide to use it again to add new authors to the catalogue :) )
Key words: zdrowie, pochwała, fraszka
Language: Polish
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Piotrek81 wrote: December 14th, 2023, 12:24 pm Something short this time, to ease my way back into recording after almost 2 months :roll:
Great! Special thanks for sharing the page link. :)

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thank you Piotr, good to have you back !! Just one small bit to correct:

> at 0:05: "for librivox DOT org" - you forgot the "dot" here for the correct address ;)

the rest was perfect, as always

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Kitty wrote: December 15th, 2023, 2:21 am
thank you Piotr, good to have you back !! Just one small bit to correct:

> at 0:05: "for librivox DOT org" - you forgot the "dot" here for the correct address ;)

the rest was perfect, as always

Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/msw035_na_zdrowie_kochanowski_pn81_128kb.mp3
Should be OK now.

Also, the day before yesterday I removed ca. 40GB of files from my hard drive. I completely forgot how big those project files are :roll:
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