PL OK. Thank you! Good luck with NaNoWriMo! You'll be welcome to more chapters if some are still available in December, which it's looking like there will be.stormyweather wrote: ↑October 22nd, 2023, 10:55 am Chapter 24 with corrections after PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_24_chambers_128kb.mp3
I'm doing NaNoWriMo, so I can't pick anything up until December, but if there are still chapters then, I'll be back!
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Hi there
Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please
Nick
Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please
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Hi there
Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please
Nick
Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please
Nick
It's all yours! Thank you for claiming!BritishNickVO wrote: ↑November 7th, 2023, 7:59 pm Hi there
Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please
Nick
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Here is Chapter 11
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_11_chambers_128kp.mp3
Length is 18:52
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_11_chambers_128kp.mp3
Length is 18:52
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Hello,
I would love to read Chapters 25 and 26.
Thank you.
I would love to read Chapters 25 and 26.
Thank you.
They're all yours! Thank you for claiming!yoricksskull wrote: ↑November 8th, 2023, 9:39 pm Hello,
I would love to read Chapters 25 and 26.
Thank you.
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Hi there!
May I claim sections 34 and 35?
Thank you,
Kendra
May I claim sections 34 and 35?
Thank you,
Kendra
Thanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed your expressive reading style. I have just a few notes:BritishNickVO wrote: ↑November 8th, 2023, 7:31 pm Here is Chapter 11
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_11_chambers_128kp.mp3
Length is 18:52
- At 3:15, after "had he been free he would have married her," could you include the line "When he got his freedom he would insist on another ceremony"?
- At 4:52, "only by the light touch of some steady, patient hand that understood," you say "only by the light touch of some steady hand that understood"
- At 8:40, "half dead, held fast by the gathering crowd," I hear "half dead, half fast by the gathering crowd"
- At 10:28, "alternately confused and dazzled in the patches of darkness and flaring light," you say "alternately confused and dazed in the patches of darkness and flaring light"
- At 14:46, "But he had thrust the fear of strangers deep into her heart," you say "But he had thrust the fear of strangers into her heart"
- At 14:59, "asking the direction of the railroad station from which trains departed for Gayfield," you say "asking the directions of the railroad station from which trains departed for Gayfield"
- At 15:28, "Is it up-state, dearie?" you say "Is it up-state, darling?"
- At 17:33, "Thank you so much for your great kindness," you say "Thank you so much for your kindness"
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
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Hi!
Here is section 34, ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3
31:42
I'll keep an eye out for notes!
Thank you,
Kendra
Here is section 34, ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3
31:42
I'll keep an eye out for notes!
Thank you,
Kendra
Thanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed the characters' accents. I have just a few notes:Kenilee18 wrote: ↑November 14th, 2023, 8:32 am Hi!
Here is section 34, ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3
31:42
I'll keep an eye out for notes!
Thank you,
Kendra
- At 8:46, "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palest gold," I hear "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palaced gold"
- At 10:48, "Would you like to have a cat for your lively ménage?" I hear "Would you like to have a cat for your lovely ménage?"
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