[COMPLETE]Love's Labour's Lost by William Shakespeare - kit

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » September 5th, 2023, 1:15 pm

Hamlet wrote: ↑August 29th, 2023, 3:22 pm I did my PLing for 4_3 today

One of the King's lines was omitted at about 5:25. "How now! what is in you? why dost thou tear it?"

Narrator, Dumain, and Costard are all fine.

Brad

Here's my corrected file:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_king_4_3.mp3

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 10th, 2023, 1:50 pm

King in 4_3 is now PL Okay

Biron for the same scene is now recorded. If it is PL Okay, I can begin editing the scene.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_biron_4_3.mp3

Brad

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » September 11th, 2023, 8:14 am

king_2_1

One minor error.

3:27 Missing word, 'may'
As honour, without breach of honour, (may)

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » September 13th, 2023, 11:37 am

Craigos wrote: ↑September 11th, 2023, 8:14 am king_2_1

One minor error.

3:27 Missing word, 'may'
As honour, without breach of honour, (may)

Here's my corrected file: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/loveslabourslost_king_2_1.mp3

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » September 14th, 2023, 10:30 pm

Thanks, guys! Sorry for being a bit MIA; I've had a busy week! But the MW is now up to date and I will post the final Dramatis Personae very soon.

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » September 18th, 2023, 11:40 am

The Dramatis Personae is now ready for PL!

Post by **Kitty** » September 19th, 2023, 12:10 am

WiltedScribe wrote: ↑September 18th, 2023, 11:40 am The Dramatis Personae is now ready for PL!

just had a look and it's PL ok.

Sonia

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 20th, 2023, 5:29 pm

I'm in the process of editing 4_3 even though my own Biron file hasn't been PLed yet, but I can fix any errors afterward if needed.
One thing that I forgot to mention when I PLed the King's speeches in that scene was that no spaces were left in a long speech in the middle of the scene in which there are two narration interruptions ("To Longaville" and "To Dumain"). No worries though. I was able to make spaces in my edit for the scene and insert the narrations.
I only mention it because I discovered that I did pretty much the same thing in the same scene. Just after Biron says, "Now step I forth to whip hypocrisy" I didn't leave a very long pause to the narrator's "Advancing." So, whoever PLs that, I already know lol.

Brad

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 20th, 2023, 5:48 pm

Actually, I just discovered an error in the King's 4_3 file that I missed before. At around 4:50, the King says, "Where hadst thou it?" twice, once to Jacquenetta and once to Costard. There is only one on the file. In editing, I tried using it twice, but it sounded too obvious on the edit.

Brad

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » September 21st, 2023, 5:22 am

Hamlet wrote: ↑September 20th, 2023, 5:48 pm Actually, I just discovered an error in the King's 4_3 file that I missed before. At around 4:50, the King says, "Where hadst thou it?" twice, once to Jacquenetta and once to Costard. There is only one on the file. In editing, I tried using it twice, but it sounded too obvious on the edit.

Brad

Oops! Sorry about that! I'll try to get a correction for you by the end of the day!

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 21st, 2023, 6:09 am

No need to correct it. As I mentioned, I've already edited that part of the scene, and I was able to separate that part of the speech to fit in the narration bits.

Brad

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » September 21st, 2023, 12:26 pm

Hamlet wrote: ↑September 21st, 2023, 6:09 am No need to correct it. As I mentioned, I've already edited that part of the scene, and I was able to separate that part of the speech to fit in the narration bits.

Brad

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » September 22nd, 2023, 8:16 pm

Thanks for moving forward with editing your scene, Brad! I would have PLed your file earlier but I've been busy moving to a new place, and with that on top of work, I didn't have the time. But I will definitely PL the edited scene and let you know if anything is missing.

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 23rd, 2023, 6:00 am

Okay, that works. It's half-edited now. I was going to hold back uploading it until my Biron file had been PLed, but now I'll do it when I'm finished editing, which should be this weekend if not later today.
And I haven't forgotten that I still have parts to record as well.

Brad

Hamlet · Post by **Hamlet** » September 23rd, 2023, 4:09 pm

Oops, I blundered. Kelly, when I told you that you didn't have to redo it, I was thinking of the spot where I added the pauses during your speech where the narrator has something to say. I completely forgot that I needed another "Where hadst thou it?" from you! I still need it.

Sorry about that!

Brad