Just two notes on Section 5:
~16:54 (A very minor thing I'm not sure about) I can hear: "...Eturka-lamma, the temple of Annu, Ninni, and Dana, the suzerains of Kish..."; the text says Nana. I thought you might be correcting wrong spelling from the book, anyway I'm aware this is just standard proof-listening and I only mention it in case it is important for you.
~19:00 (I think I can hear an intrusive "of" that could perhaps be edited out) I can hear "Footnote: Content dated 'the year of the Tigris - the river of the gods -was canalized' ". Anyway, it could be left as it is likely missed in the flow.
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