[COMPLETE] Christian Home Life, by S.S. Pugh - tg

[Fischer1483]

In chapter 12, towards the bottom of page 190 (11:38-11:45) you start a quote without stating that's it's a quote. You correct that beginning at 11:45 but you forgot to cut the portion made in error.

In the same section (at 11:50) is the phrase, "though it seemed formerly but a dim fog on the sea!" I'm hearing "though it seemed formerly but a distant fog on the sea!" It normally wouldn't need correction except that the word "distant" is in the first part of the sentence and it sounds awkward to repeat it here. Since the sentence beginning at 11:38 is is correct it might be easier to just add the word "Quote" there and cut the sentence which begins at 11:45. Just do whatever is easiest for you.

What a poignant chapter that was!

[InTheDesert]

Section 13
The Eternal Home
(12:45)

[InTheDesert]

In chapter 12, towards the bottom of page 190 (11:38-11:45) you start a quote without stating that's it's a quote. You correct that beginning at 11:45 but you forgot to cut the portion made in error.

In the same section (at 11:50) is the phrase, "though it seemed formerly but a dim fog on the sea!" I'm hearing "though it seemed formerly but a distant fog on the sea!" It normally wouldn't need correction except that the word "distant" is in the first part of the sentence and it sounds awkward to repeat it here. Since the sentence beginning at 11:38 is is correct it might be easier to just add the word "Quote" there and cut the sentence which begins at 11:45. Just do whatever is easiest for you.

What a poignant chapter that was!

Spot checks at 11:38 and 11:44.

[Fischer1483]

Chapter 12 is PL okay!

[Fischer1483]

Chapter 13 is PL okay! It was a pleasure working with you!

Thank you for picking this book. It brought forth mixed emotions as the ideals for a Christian home life were presented and as I reflected on my own faults and failures in that area. Hopefully, in my remaining time on earth, I can encourage others to strive for at least a more Christian home life, if not the ideal one.

[TriciaG]

I see this and will start cataloging!

[TriciaG]

This project is now complete! All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/christian-home-life-by-s-s-pugh/

And you even have your first review at Archive - although it's spam.

[InTheDesert]

Thanks for your work all!