~(Editing) [DR] The Third Violet by Stephen Crane - thw

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 5th, 2023, 6:52 pm

redrun wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 6:16 pm Seeing how we're down to female roles, would you mind if I jumped in as Gossiper 3?

That would be wonderful, thank you so much!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » June 5th, 2023, 6:53 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑May 26th, 2023, 2:42 pm
ChuckW wrote: ↑May 12th, 2023, 7:17 pm
All files PL OK except the following:

19
1:10 - Missing Line: “Take — an — egg.”

20
0:06 - Misread line: "Aren't you glad?" — should be “Yes. Aren't you glad?"”

22
0:41 - Misread line: “How about those violets you were moping over this morning?" — Missing the: “How about those violets you were moping over this morning? Eh, old man!"

25
1:10 - Missing line: “That’s the point.”

Thanks again! These are excellent as always!
Sorry for the delay in getting this corrections.
Let's jus say life has had several disruptions.
Back in the location where I recorded these, so they should match fairly well.

Thanks for the good PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_25.mp3

Just in case you missed these corrections that I sent in . . . .

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 5th, 2023, 7:10 pm

GettingTooOld wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 6:42 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 24th, 2023, 2:06 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_25.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_30.mp3
wannabe PL here, I checked section 18 in the ML, in bold above, it passes OK and follows the coloured text properly, no words missing or misread.

Thank you!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 5th, 2023, 7:12 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 24th, 2023, 2:06 am
ChuckW wrote: ↑May 19th, 2023, 7:36 pm
adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 14th, 2023, 11:37 pm Happy to read Wrinkles.
That would be wonderful! Thank you!
Hello Chuck, here you are:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_25.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_30.mp3

In Ch 25, from 0:34 to 0:48, I've included the stanza that is marked for another reader. I think this belongs to Wrinkles.

Regards,
Adrian

Thanks for catching that error... whoopsie-doodle. No idea how I missed that. These three bohemian characters are hard to keep track of.

Anyway, great job! Almost everything is PL OK with the exception of one line:

24:

0:18 - "Oh, it's just some dream. They gibber at anything." - Missing the second part of this line

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 5th, 2023, 7:16 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 6:53 pm
silverquill wrote: ↑May 26th, 2023, 2:42 pm
ChuckW wrote: ↑May 12th, 2023, 7:17 pm
All files PL OK except the following:

19
1:10 - Missing Line: “Take — an — egg.”

20
0:06 - Misread line: "Aren't you glad?" — should be “Yes. Aren't you glad?"”

22
0:41 - Misread line: “How about those violets you were moping over this morning?" — Missing the: “How about those violets you were moping over this morning? Eh, old man!"

25
1:10 - Missing line: “That’s the point.”

Thanks again! These are excellent as always!
Sorry for the delay in getting this corrections.
Let's jus say life has had several disruptions.
Back in the location where I recorded these, so they should match fairly well.

Thanks for the good PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_pennoyer_25.mp3
Just in case you missed these corrections that I sent in . . . .

I missed these! Thanks for the heads up!

Thank you! PL OK! I appreciate the help!

Post by **redrun** » June 5th, 2023, 7:39 pm

These bit parts make for a nice break from narration and editing.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_gossiper3_12.mp3 (0:46)

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » June 5th, 2023, 8:46 pm

ChuckW wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 6:45 pm
GregGiordano wrote: ↑June 3rd, 2023, 8:54 am
GregGiordano wrote: ↑May 29th, 2023, 7:48 am

Chuck,

I know with the long holiday weekend for many of us, this post may have been overlooked. It is the final act for Billie Hawker that needed a correction. Once you spot proof this part will be totally complete, which may help in your editing proccess.

Take care,

Greg
Chuck,

Its the pest again. I just want to remind you that I corrected the one remaining file last weekend. I'd love for it to be spot-proofed so I can close out this project.

Thanks!

Greg
You're in the clear! PL OK!

*
Thanks, Chuck! Another off my list!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 6th, 2023, 6:48 am

MajorToast wrote: ↑May 31st, 2023, 9:22 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_driver_01.mp3 1:04

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_lucian_28.mp3 4:09

Wonderful characterizations. PL OK!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 6th, 2023, 6:50 am

redrun wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 7:39 pm These bit parts make for a nice break from narration and editing.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_gossiper3_12.mp3 (0:46)

PL OK! Thank you so much!

And yeah, these bite-sized roles can make you feel so accomplished. Haha.

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » June 6th, 2023, 11:56 pm

ChuckW wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 7:12 pm ... PL OK with the exception of one line:

24:

0:18 - "Oh, it's just some dream. They gibber at anything." - Missing the second part of this line

Here you are, Chuck: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_24.mp3
excessive zeal with the delete button!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 7th, 2023, 1:25 pm

I'll get back to proof listening in a bit... but hey, check it out! Our first finished chapters:

Chapter 3 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_03_crane_128kb.mp3 [8:46]

Chapter 4 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_04_crane_128kb.mp3 [8:10]

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 12th, 2023, 11:38 am

Chapter 6 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_06_crane_128kb.mp3 [9:05]

Chapter 28 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_28_crane_128kb.mp3 [6:09]

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 12th, 2023, 1:03 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑May 25th, 2023, 8:55 am Here is the rest of Fanhall. No rush on anything. My thoughts are with you. Christine

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_fanhall_10.mp3 3:44

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_fanhall_17.mp3 0:44

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_fanhall_26.mp3 2:33

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_fanhall_29.mp3 3:01

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_fanhall_33.mp3 1:57

All of these are PL OK! Thanks Christine. Did you wind up uploading Chapter 7 too? It's the only one we have left.

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 13th, 2023, 6:21 am

Chapter 8 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_08_crane_128kb.mp3 [7:40]

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » June 13th, 2023, 1:55 pm

Chapter 9 - https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_09_crane_128kb.mp3 [7:37]