COMPLETE: Religion Without Revelation by Julian S. Huxley -jo

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Avis001
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Post by Avis001 »

Hi Verla

Below are the links for Sections 00 and 01.

Section 00 - Duration 27mins16secs
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_00_Huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 01 - Duration 24mins 04secs
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_01_huxley_128kb.mp3

Really enjoyed both. Took longer than I planned due to me catching a cold/flu. Am now recovered.

I'd love to do another two chapters. I'll check what is available and send a request.

Kind regards

Avis
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Post by mw1817 »

vviera wrote: June 2nd, 2023, 8:06 am
mw1817 wrote: June 2nd, 2023, 6:30 am
Here's the recording of Section 4 (I would've added the quotation page to the beginning later if it was needed):

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_4_huxley_128kb.mp3

The only thing I need you to do is insert “Part 1” at :19
Here's Section 4/Chapter 2 with the 'Part 1' bit around the 19s mark:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_04_huxley_128kb.mp3

Glad to hear the recording was okay overall. I had a feeling I was whistling past the graveyard with that swallowing business. I'll try to fix/edit that next time around.
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Post by vviera »

Ugh, so sorry to hear you were under the weather! Glad you’re feeling better.
PL NOTES:

Your text is great, only a few format things need fixing.

Preface
:25
You have your name in the wrong place. “Read by (name)” should go right after “…visit librivox.org” (see opening post). BUT, since you have your name/place/date at the end of the recording, reading your name here should be deleted. (Read it only in one place or the other.)

10:33, 23:25
Remove footnotes – see opening post instructions to omit footnotes
***
01
:23 – same thing about name as in preface
16:00 and 23:41, remove footnotes
***
FYI for both. Notes that you don’t need to do anything about now, just recommendations for the future:
1) In the preface section, the URL has Huxley capitalized; there should be no capital letters in file names. (MC will fix this on cataloging.)
2) Quote, end quote. If you have something in quotes, if it’s any length at all, it’s helpful to the listener to say “quote” at the beginning and “end quote” at the end. For a single word or very short phrase, maybe 4 words or less?, I just use my voice to emphasize, to indicate it’s kind of a little different piece of the text. At your discretion, use in text as well to enlighten the listener.
3) Footnotes will be deleted here, but on a project where you use them, say “footnote” at beginning and “end footnote” at end. You don’t have to say the number.

Just let me know what other sections you'd like. I’m happy to have you.

Verla
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Post by vviera »

mw1817 wrote: June 2nd, 2023, 11:54 am

Here's Section 4/Chapter 2 with the 'Part 1' bit around the 19s mark:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_04_huxley_128kb.mp3
Sorry to be so picky, but you put "part 1" in the wrong place. It should read as in MW - "Chapter II, A Preliminary Interpretation, Pt. 1"

Thanks for correcting the URL. That will save the MC a bit of work down the line.
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Avis001
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Post by Avis001 »

Hi Verla

Thank you for your prompt response and comments.

Below are the edited links to sections 00 and 01. As requested, I have removed my name at the beginning of the recordings (retained at the end) and deleted all footnotes.

Thank you for the information on the recording of footnotes and quotes, which I have noted for future use, where required and I apologise for the capitalisation error :roll: (now corrected for section 00), which was an oversight.

Section 00 - Duration 26:32 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_00_huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 01 - Duration 23:30 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_01_huxley_128kb.mp3

Please advise if any further changes required.

I would love to read sections 05 and 06, if ok :thumbs:

Kind regards

Avis
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Post by vviera »

Avis001 wrote: June 3rd, 2023, 12:28 am Below are the edited links to sections 00 and 01.

I would love to read sections 05 and 06, if ok :thumbs:
Sections 0 and 1 now PL OK :clap:

I have assigned you sections 5 and 6, thank you!

There's never a need to apologise - no worries! We all get PL Notes (yep, I record too). That's what the process is for.

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Post by Avis001 »

Hi Verla

Below, please note the links to sections 05 and 06, which I hope are ok.

Section 05 - Duration 16:18 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_05_huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 06 - Duration 14:25 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_06_huxley_128kb.mp3

Please advise if any changes required.

I'll be happy to record, next, sections 07 and 08 if currently unassigned.

Kind regards

Avis
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Post by vviera »

Avis001 wrote: June 6th, 2023, 10:02 am Hi Verla

Below, please note the links to sections 05 and 06, which I hope are ok.

Section 05 - Duration 16:18 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_05_huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 06 - Duration 14:25 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_06_huxley_128kb.mp3

Please advise if any changes required.

I'll be happy to record, next, sections 07 and 08 if currently unassigned.

Kind regards

Avis
Thank you! I will probably be able to PL 5 & 6 today. (Or overnight while you sleep :) ) Assigning 7 & 8 now.
Verla
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Avis001 wrote: June 6th, 2023, 10:02 am Hi Verla

Below, please note the links to sections 05 and 06, which I hope are ok.
Please advise if any changes required.

Avis
You sound great as usual. Need a couple edits on each one:

Section 5
9:33
Text: “of all matter…”; heard: “of all living matter”
Near top of p. 75

It looks like there are 7 or 8 seconds of silence at the end. Please reduce to 5.

Section 6
1:46
You put an extra syllable into “vegetarianism,” pronouncing it “vegitenarianism” Is that British, or just an error?
Bottom of p. 81

8:41
Text: “causal”; heard: “casual”
p. 85, middle of paragraph that begins “As regards more…”
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Post by Avis001 »

Hi Verla,

Noted. Will edit and re-upload :D thanks so much for stating the page and location.

Kind regards

Avis
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Post by Avis001 »

Hi Verla

I'm pleased to confirm that all edits completed for sections 05 and 06. Here are new links.

Section 05 - Duration 16:15 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_05_huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 06 - Duration 14:25 - https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/religionwithoutrevelation_06_huxley_128kb.mp3

Section 05:
- 09:33(P75 near top) "of all matter" correctly recorded
- Silence at end reduced to 5 secs.

Section 06:
- 01:46 (P81 bottom) "vegetarianism" correctly recorded - [for some bizarre reason I really struggled with this word. I kept tripping over my tongue with it and had rerecorded the sentence with it in several times; so it made me laugh when you noted that I had invented a new pronunciation for it - now I know why it just didn't sound right :lol: ]

- 08:41 (P85 middle para) "causal" correctly recorded.

Kind regards

Avis
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Post by nslowik »

Hello,
Could I claim section 3, "Chapter I, A Preliminary Statement, Pt. 3"?
Thank you,
Noah
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nslowik wrote: June 7th, 2023, 8:23 am Hello,
Could I claim section 3, "Chapter I, A Preliminary Statement, Pt. 3"?
Thank you,
Noah
Hi, nslowik - Welcome to librivox!

I see that you just posted your 1-minute test a few minutes ago. When you see [OK] at the beginning of the post title, that means you’re ready to claim a section and start recording. After you get your PL OK on the 1-minute test, come back to the forum and I'll assign the claimed section to you.

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Note, I can't assign the section without the above info.

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Post by nslowik »

vviera wrote: June 7th, 2023, 8:34 am
nslowik wrote: June 7th, 2023, 8:23 am Hello,
Could I claim section 3, "Chapter I, A Preliminary Statement, Pt. 3"?
Thank you,
Noah
Hi, nslowik - Welcome to librivox!

...

If you have questions just ask. We are a pretty friendly crowd.

Verla
Hi Verla,

Great! I will come back once I get the OK on my 1-minute test.

I will post it again later in my first claim request, but I would like to use Noah Slowik (my Real Life name) for the LibriVox catalog, and I don't have any personal website to be linked for the catalog.

Thank you! Will talk again soon.

-Noah
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Post by vviera »

Avis001 wrote: June 7th, 2023, 1:35 am Hi Verla,

Noted. Will edit and re-upload :D thanks so much for stating the page and location.

Kind regards

Avis
All good now! Secs. 5 & 6 PL OK
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