COMPLETE: The Best Short Stories of 1917 -jo

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Rel22 wrote: May 15th, 2023, 4:42 am
brownrottger wrote: May 14th, 2023, 4:48 pm Section 27 is PL ok. Very authentic voicing and accents!
Tku ! I really liked this story!
And I apologise as I didn't realise I shouldn't have made all my submitted filenames with the 3 digits section numbers.
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No worries, ever!
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Hello
Here is section 6
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/bestshortstories1917_06_various_128kb.mp3
A touching story. But couldn't do full justice with my narration with all the slangs
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Indianreader wrote: May 22nd, 2023, 6:13 am Hello
Here is section 6
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/bestshortstories1917_06_various_128kb.mp3
A touching story. But couldn't do full justice with my narration with all the slangs
I'm sure its Great! Thanks. What is the length?
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brownrottger wrote: May 22nd, 2023, 6:37 am
Indianreader wrote: May 22nd, 2023, 6:13 am Hello
Here is section 6
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/bestshortstories1917_06_various_128kb.mp3
A touching story. But couldn't do full justice with my narration with all the slangs
I'm sure its Great! Thanks. What is the length?
Oops...It is 1:16:41
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Section 6:
32:32 remove background noise and error "whistle... likewise... confirm a majority of the observers in partic... whistle"
32:45 begins some rather loud disturbances in back ground but only when you are speaking. Its not preventing me from hearing you but if you could do something about it that would be great.
48:59 should be "gentlemen riding two by two on broad- backed steeds"; I heard "gentlemen riding two by two on broad-backed streets"
1:05:36 should be "that I was leadin' a lot of little boys"; I heard "that I wasn't leadin' a lot of little boys"
1:07:21 remove repeat "so I never let on"
1:07:58 should be "and if the money is his'n by rights"; I heard "and if the money isn't his'n by rights"
1:16:31 remove "The end of Boys will be Boys" which is not in the outro script.

I loved this story sooo much and you did a great job with it!!!
Thanks,
Christine
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brownrottger wrote: May 23rd, 2023, 11:59 am Section 6:
32:32 remove background noise and error "whistle... likewise... confirm a majority of the observers in partic... whistle"
32:45 begins some rather loud disturbances in back ground but only when you are speaking. Its not preventing me from hearing you but if you could do something about it that would be great.
48:59 should be "gentlemen riding two by two on broad- backed steeds"; I heard "gentlemen riding two by two on broad-backed streets"
1:05:36 should be "that I was leadin' a lot of little boys"; I heard "that I wasn't leadin' a lot of little boys"
1:07:21 remove repeat "so I never let on"
1:07:58 should be "and if the money is his'n by rights"; I heard "and if the money isn't his'n by rights"
1:16:31 remove "The end of Boys will be Boys" which is not in the outro script.

I loved this story sooo much and you did a great job with it!!!
Thanks,
Christine
Thank you Christine. Will edit them shortly
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brownrottger wrote: May 23rd, 2023, 11:59 am Section 6:
32:32 remove background noise and error "whistle... likewise... confirm a majority of the observers in partic... whistle"
32:45 begins some rather loud disturbances in back ground but only when you are speaking. Its not preventing me from hearing you but if you could do something about it that would be great.
48:59 should be "gentlemen riding two by two on broad- backed steeds"; I heard "gentlemen riding two by two on broad-backed streets"
1:05:36 should be "that I was leadin' a lot of little boys"; I heard "that I wasn't leadin' a lot of little boys"
1:07:21 remove repeat "so I never let on"
1:07:58 should be "and if the money is his'n by rights"; I heard "and if the money isn't his'n by rights"
1:16:31 remove "The end of Boys will be Boys" which is not in the outro script.

I loved this story sooo much and you did a great job with it!!!
Thanks,
Christine
Here is the corrected file
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/bestshortstories1917_06_various_128kb.mp3
1:16:28
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Section 6 is now PL ok.
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Would you like me to proof s. 30?

Cz
I asked my librarian about the noise, and she said, "no one would come here
if they weren't allowed to talk out loud." So I read out loud.

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czandra wrote: June 1st, 2023, 12:02 pm Would you like me to proof s. 30?

Cz
Yes, please!
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brownrottger wrote: June 1st, 2023, 1:21 pm
czandra wrote: June 1st, 2023, 12:02 pm Would you like me to proof s. 30?

Cz
Yes, please!
I would like to email you a recording, because there's lots of tiny bits, easy to miss in a text like this (poets never stop).
Okay?

Cz
I asked my librarian about the noise, and she said, "no one would come here
if they weren't allowed to talk out loud." So I read out loud.

Je lis à haute voix car refléchir fait trop de bruit!
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czandra wrote: June 1st, 2023, 1:27 pm
brownrottger wrote: June 1st, 2023, 1:21 pm
czandra wrote: June 1st, 2023, 12:02 pm Would you like me to proof s. 30?

Cz
Yes, please!
I would like to email you a recording, because there's lots of tiny bits, easy to miss in a text like this (poets never stop).
Okay?

Cz
If there is a lot to correct I can just go over it myself again. Sorry to bother.
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No trouble. I'm obsessive compulsive with these things, as you've probably noticed! Glad to help.

Cz
I asked my librarian about the noise, and she said, "no one would come here
if they weren't allowed to talk out loud." So I read out loud.

Je lis à haute voix car refléchir fait trop de bruit!
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Hey everyone,

I have finished most edits on my first section recently, still pushing through.

I see the rest of the project is completed, I do not want to hold anyone up. Are you still comfortable having me complete my portions, or would you like to release them?

I'll understand either way. Thank you kindly for letting me know.
~Christine~



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WinterMoon wrote: September 13th, 2023, 10:39 am Hey everyone,

I have finished most edits on my first section recently, still pushing through.

I see the rest of the project is completed, I do not want to hold anyone up. Are you still comfortable having me complete my portions, or would you like to release them?

I'll understand either way. Thank you kindly for letting me know.
Hi Christine, I really, really want you to continue on. Thank you for checking in. It sounds like you are almost there. Hope you are well and feeling better in every way possible.
Blessings to you,
Christine
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