~(Editing) [DR] The Third Violet by Stephen Crane - thw

[adrianstephens]

Happy to read Wrinkles.

[GregGiordano]

Chuck,

On Saturday (May 13) I posted the corrections you requested to Chapters 21 and 22 for Billie Hawker. I also posted the final 6 chapters for Billie as well. So, unless there are some unforeseen errors, my part is complete!

It has been great working with you once again!

Take care,

Greg

[ChuckW]

As promised, the final six chapters of Billie Hawker -

Chapter 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_26.mp3

Chapter 27:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_27.mp3

Chapter 28:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_28.mp3

Chapter 29:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_29.mp3

Chapter 32:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_32.mp3

Chapter 33:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_33.mp3

Take care,

Greg

Thanks Greg! I'll get to these this weekend.

[ChuckW]

Happy to read Wrinkles.

That would be wonderful! Thank you!

[GregGiordano]

As promised, the final six chapters of Billie Hawker -

Chapter 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_26.mp3

Chapter 27:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_27.mp3

Chapter 28:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_28.mp3

Chapter 29:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_29.mp3

Chapter 32:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_32.mp3

Chapter 33:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_33.mp3

Take care,

Greg

Thanks Greg! I'll get to these this weekend.

Chuck,

I see these and the two prior chapters (38 & 39) that needing correcting have not been proofed yet. Is everything okay?

Thanks!

Greg

[adrianstephens]

Can I have some guidance please?

The MW says "Frequently speaks in tandem with his flatmates, either in a cluster of voices or in unison."
And there are lines like "who is she" with each word in a different colour.
I started recording reading all these words, assuming they were going to be put in chorus by the editor.

However, I then came to: "Oh, you don't, eh? You don't? Oh, no! How about those violets you were moping over this morning? Eh, old man! Oh, no, you don't know what we mean! Oh, no! How about those violets, eh? How about 'em?" Which is set in three colours.
It seems this won't work in chorus.

So please advise, am I supposed only to read the words that have my colour?

[ToddHW]

Here is John Hawker.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_11.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_14.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_18.mp3

Thanks, Todd

[MajorToast]

I would like to claim Lucian Pontiac please.

[MajorToast]

If it ok and does not conflict. I can take the role of the "Driver" too.

[ChuckW]

I would like to claim Lucian Pontiac please.

These would be awesome. Thanks!

[ChuckW]

As promised, the final six chapters of Billie Hawker -

Chapter 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_26.mp3

Chapter 27:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_27.mp3

Chapter 28:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_28.mp3

Chapter 29:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_29.mp3

Chapter 32:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_32.mp3

Chapter 33:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_billiehawker_33.mp3

Take care,

Greg

Thanks Greg! I'll get to these this weekend.

Chuck,

I see these and the two prior chapters (38 & 39) that needing correcting have not been proofed yet. Is everything okay?

Thanks!

Greg

Sorry Greg... real life got the best of me. My dog was just diagnosed with a brain tumor. There's a lot going on at the moment, but will PL these as soon as I can.

[ChuckW]

Here is John Hawker.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_11.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_14.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_johnhawker_18.mp3

Thanks, Todd

Thanks Todd!

[ChuckW]

Can I have some guidance please?

The MW says "Frequently speaks in tandem with his flatmates, either in a cluster of voices or in unison."
And there are lines like "who is she" with each word in a different colour.
I started recording reading all these words, assuming they were going to be put in chorus by the editor.

However, I then came to: "Oh, you don't, eh? You don't? Oh, no! How about those violets you were moping over this morning? Eh, old man! Oh, no, you don't know what we mean! Oh, no! How about those violets, eh? How about 'em?" Which is set in three colours.
It seems this won't work in chorus.

So please advise, am I supposed only to read the words that have my colour?

Yes, as you've surmised, the lines where each word/letter is a different color, everyone's speaking in tandem. If it's an isolated phrase within a block of text, just read the lines that are color-coded. I hope that clarifies things somewhat... sorry for the confusion!

[adrianstephens]

Yes, as you've surmised, the lines where each word/letter is a different color, everyone's speaking in tandem. If it's an isolated phrase within a block of text, just read the lines that are color-coded. I hope that clarifies things somewhat... sorry for the confusion!

Thank you, Chuck. You get my gruff covid voice this time around ...

[adrianstephens]

Happy to read Wrinkles.

That would be wonderful! Thank you!

Hello Chuck, here you are:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_25.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_30.mp3

In Ch 25, from 0:34 to 0:48, I've included the stanza that is marked for another reader. I think this belongs to Wrinkles.

Regards,
Adrian