COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] The Full Tide by John Frederick Freeman - dl

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aradlaw wrote: May 11th, 2023, 7:48 pm Here is my reading, ready for PL...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/fulltide_freeman_dl_128kb.mp3
1:08
Hi David,

Good reading but there are just a few things you may wish to fix up:

1) In line one (0:13), I'm hearing "whispering me to you" instead of "whispering me of you";

2) In stanza two's first line (0:37), the second half seems to be missing ("the full tide runneth again");

3) In the line following (0:38), beginning with "Shall yet", I'm hearing "Yet shall";

4) And in the second last line (0:52), I'm hearing "the retreating tide" rather than "the retreated tide."

~~~~~
Bruce.
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Thank you for the PL Bruce, I* think that was done too late at night. :roll:
Here is an edited version...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/fulltide_freeman_dl_128kb.mp3
1:09
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Thank you Erin. :thumbs:
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Let's give Peace a chance. :wink:
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aradlaw wrote: May 12th, 2023, 9:11 am Thank you for the PL Bruce, I* think that was done too late at night. :roll:
Here is an edited version...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/fulltide_freeman_dl_128kb.mp3
1:09
Sounds great, David. PL OK.

(The MW time still shows 1:08.)

~~~~~
Bruce.
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Thanks for the spot PL Bruce. :)

Thank you Mayah. :thumbs:
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Late this week, and not in my usual "studio" so there's more reverb than I'd like.
We'll have to see what the next week brings.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/fulltide_freeman_lcw_128kb.mp3 1:01
On the road again, so delays are possible
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Thank you Larry. :thumbs:

This project is now closed. Many thanks to all readers this week. :clap:

This project is now complete!
All audio files can be found on our catalog page:
https://librivox.org/the-full-tide-by-john-frederick-freeman/
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