COMPLETE: The Tower Treasure, by Franklin W. Dixon - jo

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » March 28th, 2023, 2:17 pm

Things have not yet improved for Perry and his family, but they are making the best of the situation.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_13_dixon_128kb.mp3 [10:25]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » March 28th, 2023, 7:52 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑March 28th, 2023, 2:17 pm Things have not yet improved for Perry and his family, but they are making the best of the situation.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_13_dixon_128kb.mp3 [10:25]

They are having a good attitude.

PL OK.

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » March 29th, 2023, 11:39 am

What we have here - is a failure to cooperate. (or something similar

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https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_14_dixon_128kb.mp3 [15:07]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » March 30th, 2023, 4:10 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑March 29th, 2023, 11:39 am What we have here - is a failure to cooperate. (or something similar )

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_14_dixon_128kb.mp3 [15:07]

Yep.

PL OK.

M

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » March 30th, 2023, 5:04 pm

Chet is up to his old tricks - this time with some help from the gang

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_15_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:22]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » March 31st, 2023, 6:33 am

JHedrick wrote: ↑March 30th, 2023, 5:04 pm Chet is up to his old tricks - this time with some help from the gang

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_15_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:22]

that Chet.

One comment on this chapter.

4:23 please remove "fine idea" as it is repeated afterwards with the accent.

M

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » March 31st, 2023, 8:12 am

Good catch!

Here is the correction

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_15_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:21]

Along with Red Jackley's confession:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_16_dixon_128kb.mp3 [8:42]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » April 1st, 2023, 7:35 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑March 31st, 2023, 8:12 am Good catch!

Here is the correction
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_15_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:21]

Along with Red Jackley's confession:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_16_dixon_128kb.mp3 [8:42]

Both chapters are PL OK.

and all.

M

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » April 2nd, 2023, 8:47 am

And what is more fun than searching a tower? Searching two towers!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_17_dixon_128kb.mp3 [10:31]
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_18_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:14]

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » April 4th, 2023, 7:51 am

So then Fenton is all like, "I give you an easy job and it does not get done. I guess I will just have to handle this myself. Hrumph!"

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_19_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:17]

And then Adelia gets all up in a huff herself and says, "Well what do you expect when you ask a man to do something?! I guess searching the tower is up to me if I want it done right!"

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_20_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:00]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » April 6th, 2023, 4:16 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑April 2nd, 2023, 8:47 am And what is more fun than searching a tower? Searching two towers!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_17_dixon_128kb.mp3 [10:31]
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_18_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:14]

And to what effect. Both chapters 17 and 18 are PL OK.

M

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » April 7th, 2023, 5:18 pm

JHedrick wrote: ↑April 4th, 2023, 7:51 am So then Fenton is all like, "I give you an easy job and it does not get done. I guess I will just have to handle this myself. Hrumph!"

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_19_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:17]

And then Adelia gets all up in a huff herself and says, "Well what do you expect when you ask a man to do something?! I guess searching the tower is up to me if I want it done right!"

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_20_dixon_128kb.mp3 [11:00]

Love your additions. They are perfect. Too bad you couldn't put them in.

Both chapters are PL OK.

M

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » April 7th, 2023, 6:00 pm

Ah yes, ours is to read what is written

So, here we have a two-part climax:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_21_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:23]
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_22_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:25]

JHedrick · Post by **JHedrick** » April 8th, 2023, 11:58 am

Time to wrap this up and put a big red bow on it:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_23_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:26]
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_24_dixon_128kb.mp3 [7:45]

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » April 11th, 2023, 8:36 am

JHedrick wrote: ↑April 7th, 2023, 6:00 pm Ah yes, ours is to read what is written

So, here we have a two-part climax:

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_21_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:23]
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/towertreasure_22_dixon_128kb.mp3 [9:25]

Two more PL OK's here.

M