[COMPLETE] The Temple by George Herbert - kaz

HobbitinWonderland · Post by **HobbitinWonderland** » March 27th, 2023, 4:22 am

I would like to read #33 Affliction by George Herbert

(this will be my first recording, a dream for many many years )

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 27th, 2023, 9:01 am

HobbitinWonderland wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 4:22 am I would like to read #33 Affliction by George Herbert
(this will be my first recording, a dream for many many years )

Hi
Welcome to LibriVox

I see that you have completed your 1-minute test

I have reserved section 33 for you.

I first need to register you as a Reader. To do this I need to know what name you would like to appear in the catalogue with your recordings. This can be your forumname, real name or anything else.
Good luck!

MattFlowitt · Post by **MattFlowitt** » March 27th, 2023, 12:57 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_072_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:13]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_073_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:36]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_074_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:59]

Let me know if there's anything that needs fixing! Thanks for the chance, these were fun to read.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 28th, 2023, 1:01 am

MattFlowitt wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 12:57 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_072_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:13]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_073_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:36]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_074_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:59]
Let me know if there's anything that needs fixing! Thanks for the chance, these were fun to read.

Hi Matt
Thank you for these.
All 3 poems are well read and the text is correct apart from one variant noted below.
They all pass Checker for technical correctness.
Well done, a good first effort

However all 3 recordings need to have 5 seconds of silence at the end (this is requirement of all LibriVox recordings).

For section 73:
at 0.52 (line 14) the word If is missing from If either will convert us ..., which changes the meaning of the line.

Please make these changes and re-upload with the same filenames

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » March 28th, 2023, 1:46 am

Sections 63 and 64

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_063_herbert_128kb.mp3 (0:57)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_064_herbert_128kb.mp3 (2:22)

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 28th, 2023, 5:49 am

KevinS wrote: ↑March 28th, 2023, 1:46 am Sections 63 and 64
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_063_herbert_128kb.mp3 (0:57)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_064_herbert_128kb.mp3 (2:22)

Both PL OK!

Thanks Kevin

MattFlowitt · Post by **MattFlowitt** » March 28th, 2023, 12:39 pm

alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 28th, 2023, 1:01 am
MattFlowitt wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 12:57 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_072_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:13]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_073_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:36]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_074_herbert_128kb.mp3 [01:59]
Let me know if there's anything that needs fixing! Thanks for the chance, these were fun to read.
Hi Matt
Thank you for these.
All 3 poems are well read and the text is correct apart from one variant noted below.
They all pass Checker for technical correctness.
Well done, a good first effort

However all 3 recordings need to have 5 seconds of silence at the end (this is requirement of all LibriVox recordings).

For section 73:
at 0.52 (line 14) the word If is missing from If either will convert us ..., which changes the meaning of the line.

Please make these changes and re-upload with the same filenames

Hi,

Thank you for the detailed notes! I'll make the changes and re-upload as soon as I can.

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » March 29th, 2023, 12:10 am

Sections 65 and 66

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_065_herbert_128kb.mp3 (1:24)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_066_herbert_128kb.mp3 (2:39)

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 29th, 2023, 1:16 am

KevinS wrote: ↑March 29th, 2023, 12:10 am Sections 65 and 66
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_065_herbert_128kb.mp3 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_066_herbert_128kb.mp3 (2:39)

Both PL OK!
Thanks Kevin for this excellent block of recordings

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » March 29th, 2023, 3:17 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 29th, 2023, 1:16 am
KevinS wrote: ↑March 29th, 2023, 12:10 am Sections 65 and 66
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_065_herbert_128kb.mp3 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_066_herbert_128kb.mp3 (2:39)
Both PL OK!
Thanks Kevin for this excellent block of recordings

I have some other commitments, but will return soon to record more.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 29th, 2023, 3:20 am

KevinS wrote: ↑March 29th, 2023, 3:17 am I have some other commitments, but will return soon to record more.

lethargilistic · Post by **lethargilistic** » March 29th, 2023, 5:42 pm

Hey. Checking in. I made a recording when I signed up, but it had a mistake that made the take was unusable. Haven't had a chance to rerecord. If I don't get back to it within the next week, you can take me off.

HobbitinWonderland · Post by **HobbitinWonderland** » March 30th, 2023, 5:24 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 9:01 am
HobbitinWonderland wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 4:22 am I would like to read #33 Affliction by George Herbert
(this will be my first recording, a dream for many many years )
Hi
Welcome to LibriVox
I see that you have completed your 1-minute test
I have reserved section 33 for you.

I first need to register you as a Reader. To do this I need to know what name you would like to appear in the catalogue with your recordings. This can be your forumname, real name or anything else.
Good luck!

Thank you, Alan! I've been getting familiar with the poem (feels like my life story!) and will record soon.

For the registry...you can use the name: Suzanne Carol

How many poems/works can one reserve at one time? My guess is: as many as we will accomplish in a month? Am I close?

Thanks again!

HobbitinWonderland · Post by **HobbitinWonderland** » March 30th, 2023, 5:53 am

HobbitinWonderland wrote: ↑March 30th, 2023, 5:24 am
alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 9:01 am
HobbitinWonderland wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 4:22 am I would like to read #33 Affliction by George Herbert
(this will be my first recording, a dream for many many years )
Hi
Welcome to LibriVox
I see that you have completed your 1-minute test
I have reserved section 33 for you.

I first need to register you as a Reader. To do this I need to know what name you would like to appear in the catalogue with your recordings. This can be your forumname, real name or anything else.
Good luck!
Thank you, Alan! I've been getting familiar with the poem (feels like my life story!) and will record soon.

For the registry...you can use the name: Suzanne Carol

How many poems/works can one reserve at one time? My guess is: as many as we will accomplish in a month? Am I close?

Thanks again!

Oh dear! Apparently there is more than one poem by Herbert with the title Affliction.

I see that someone has already read the one I was thinking I had committed to. I'm so thankful to have mulled it deeply, though, and will record it for my own benefit.

So...

Let's put a pause on Affliction 33 until I can look over the correct poem and I'll get back with you. [edit: I looked it over and am still good to go!]

Hopefully there's grace for the newbie!

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 30th, 2023, 9:23 am

HobbitinWonderland wrote: ↑March 27th, 2023, 4:22 am I would like to read #33 Affliction by George Herbert
(this will be my first recording, a dream for many many years )

Hi Suzanne
I have registered you as a Reader.
It is confusing to have several poems with the same name which is why I put the page number of each poem in the Magic Window. Perhaps when you have decided which poem to read you can claim it giving title, section number and page number to avoid further confusion.
There is no official limit on claims but most Book Coordinators (BC) have unofficial limits. For a new reader, like yourself, I would ask you to upload a first recording and get it checked and OKed before doing more. This avoids the risk of making the same mistakes in several recordings as new readers often do.
Waiting to hear from you