Thanks again, and great job on this marathon of a chapter! I have just a few notes:
- At 0:47, "to comfort her mistress and to assure her that under whatever vicissitudes of fortune," you say "to comfort her mistress and to assure her that whatever vicissitudes of fortune" (p. 183)
- At 9:03, "For all one could tell, the philosopher may have thought that he was carrying letters on the subject of the differential calculus," the end of "calculus" is cut off (p. 189)
- At 32:52, "moving it in the moonlight," you say "moving it in the sunlight" (p. 203)
- At 37:34, "I saw the look in your eyes," could you edit out the first "I saw"? (p. 207)
- At 42:09, "There was a strange light in her eyes as she recalled the terrible scene in the death-chamber," I hear "There was a strange light in her eyes as she called the terrible scene in the death-chamber" (p. 209-210)
- At 50:37, "by patches of wood and little wind-beaten copses," you say "by patches of wood and little beaten copses" (p. 215)
- At 51:17, "Harry would lose sight and knowledge of her unless he kept close beside her," you say "Harry would lose sight and knowledge of her unless he kept close behind her" (p. 216)
- At 56:24, "well out of sight among the thick undergrowth," you say "well out of sight of the thick undergrowth" (p. 219)
- At 1:03:24, "in their profound solitude," you say "to their profound solitude" (p. 224)
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
