COMPLETE Robert Graves by Robert Graves -choc

[elsieselwyn]

I can PL yours, Kevin. I am in the U.S.

[KevinS]

I can PL yours, Kevin. I am in the U.S.

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the poems.

[chocoholic]

Thanks, Elsie! I've got you in as DPL.

Moving to the Solos forum now for possibly a very brief stay

[elsieselwyn]

This was fun - I really liked these poems and your reading. My favorite poem was Diplomatic Relations. It made me laugh.

Here are my PL notes
Anything in italics was something I noted, but probably is not significant enough to change. You can decide either way

Section 1:

0:32 heard "Spoke words of grace he spoke"
text says "Soft words of grace he spoke"

13:28 heard "cakeberries" but text says "crakeberries"
not sure if that one is significant enough to fix

14:41 heard "in this despair of you in this despair for you"
text says "in this despair for you"

14:51 heard "give me then a thought for me give then a thought for me"
text says "give then a thought for me"

14:58 heard "do but remember, we once in love could agree, do remember, we once in love could agree"
text says "do but remember, we once in love could agree"

15:54 repeat "and raven's croak was shepherd's horn to slow cloud shadow strayed across"

16:21 stumble over "streaming"

16:26 stumble over "so now"

16:29 repeat "but poised in marble thought you stood"

16:50 repeat "love might come at your command yet will not stay"

17:21 heard "in the presence of empty air is the presence of empty air"
text says "is the presence of empty air"

----
Section 2:

11:54 repeat "from"

13:39 heard "let us observe what with uncommon sense"
text says "let us observe with what uncommon sense"

13:45 say "Red King" instead of "Red Queen"
13:53 say "kings and kittens" instead of "queens and kittens"
probably not significant enough to fix but noted it because it was a reference to Alice's Wonderland

15:05 heard "with those same pangs that lately choked our breath"
text says "with those same pangs that lately choked her breath"
I think it changes the meaning here

[KevinS]

This was fun - I really liked these poems and your reading. My favorite poem was Diplomatic Relations. It made me laugh.

Here are my PL notes
Anything in italics was something I noted, but probably is not significant enough to change. You can decide either way

Section 1:

0:32 heard "Spoke words of grace he spoke"
text says "Soft words of grace he spoke"

13:28 heard "cakeberries" but text says "crakeberries"
not sure if that one is significant enough to fix

14:41 heard "in this despair of you in this despair for you"
text says "in this despair for you"

14:51 heard "give me then a thought for me give then a thought for me"
text says "give then a thought for me"

14:58 heard "do but remember, we once in love could agree, do remember, we once in love could agree"
text says "do but remember, we once in love could agree"

15:54 repeat "and raven's croak was shepherd's horn to slow cloud shadow strayed across"

16:21 stumble over "streaming"

16:26 stumble over "so now"

16:29 repeat "but poised in marble thought you stood"

16:50 repeat "love might come at your command yet will not stay"

17:21 heard "in the presence of empty air is the presence of empty air"
text says "is the presence of empty air"

----
Section 2:

11:54 repeat "from"

13:39 heard "let us observe what with uncommon sense"
text says "let us observe with what uncommon sense"

13:45 say "Red King" instead of "Red Queen"
13:53 say "kings and kittens" instead of "queens and kittens"
probably not significant enough to fix but noted it because it was a reference to Alice's Wonderland

15:05 heard "with those same pangs that lately choked our breath"
text says "with those same pangs that lately choked her breath"
I think it changes the meaning here

I'm so glad you like the poems. I apologize, though, for all my mistakes. I should not have recorded when I did when so tired. I see that this is what happens.

I'll try to get to these corrections soon.

Thank you again!

[elsieselwyn]

I'm so glad you like the poems. I apologize, though, for all my mistakes. I should not have recorded when I did when so tired. I see that this is what happens.

I'll try to get to these corrections soon.

Thank you again!

Oh no worries! Sometimes it just is one of those days

[KevinS]

This was fun - I really liked these poems and your reading. My favorite poem was Diplomatic Relations. It made me laugh.

Here are my PL notes
Anything in italics was something I noted, but probably is not significant enough to change. You can decide either way

Section 1:

0:32 heard "Spoke words of grace he spoke"
text says "Soft words of grace he spoke"

13:28 heard "cakeberries" but text says "crakeberries"
not sure if that one is significant enough to fix

14:41 heard "in this despair of you in this despair for you"
text says "in this despair for you"

14:51 heard "give me then a thought for me give then a thought for me"
text says "give then a thought for me"

14:58 heard "do but remember, we once in love could agree, do remember, we once in love could agree"
text says "do but remember, we once in love could agree"

15:54 repeat "and raven's croak was shepherd's horn to slow cloud shadow strayed across"

16:21 stumble over "streaming"

16:26 stumble over "so now"

16:29 repeat "but poised in marble thought you stood"

16:50 repeat "love might come at your command yet will not stay"

17:21 heard "in the presence of empty air is the presence of empty air"
text says "is the presence of empty air"

----
Section 2:

11:54 repeat "from"

13:39 heard "let us observe what with uncommon sense"
text says "let us observe with what uncommon sense"

13:45 say "Red King" instead of "Red Queen"
13:53 say "kings and kittens" instead of "queens and kittens"
probably not significant enough to fix but noted it because it was a reference to Alice's Wonderland

15:05 heard "with those same pangs that lately choked our breath"
text says "with those same pangs that lately choked her breath"
I think it changes the meaning here

Corrections:

Section 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_01_graves_128kb.mp3 (17:07)

Section 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_02_graves_128kb.mp3 (same time)

I'm really sorry about this mess. I will have to go more slowly now so I catch my omissions and mistakes.

[elsieselwyn]

Corrections:

Section 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_01_graves_128kb.mp3 (17:07)

Section 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_02_graves_128kb.mp3 (same time)

I'm really sorry about this mess. I will have to go more slowly now so I catch my omissions and mistakes.

Don't feel bad! I actually really enjoy to PL and don't mind noting a lot or a few mistakes. I like to draw while listening with paper next to me to note errors - so no real extra effort on my part.

I make as many, if not more mistakes, as you sometimes - especially with twisty poems. I usually use the clapping method to help me find them all. Fortunately, my mom and cats don't mind the incessant clapping

I will spot PL these tomorrow

[KevinS]

Corrections:

Section 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_01_graves_128kb.mp3 (17:07)

Section 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/robertgraves_02_graves_128kb.mp3 (same time)

I'm really sorry about this mess. I will have to go more slowly now so I catch my omissions and mistakes.

Don't feel bad! I actually really enjoy to PL and don't mind noting a lot or a few mistakes. I like to draw while listening with paper next to me to note errors - so no real extra effort on my part.

I make as many, if not more mistakes, as you sometimes - especially with twisty poems. I usually use the clapping method to help me find them all. Fortunately, my mom and cats don't mind the incessant clapping

I will spot PL these tomorrow

Thank you. You're very kind.

[elsieselwyn]

Both are PL OK Great job editing, Kevin! I couldn't tell in most places that you had even edited.

[chocoholic]

Congratulations! Here's your catalog page:
https://librivox.org/augustan-books-of-modern-poetry-robert-graves-by-robert-graves/

[KevinS]

Both are PL OK Great job editing, Kevin! I couldn't tell in most places that you had even edited.

Thank you!

That's nice to hear as editing is my bugbear!

[KevinS]

Congratulations! Here's your catalog page:
https://librivox.org/augustan-books-of-modern-poetry-robert-graves-by-robert-graves/

Many thanks to you!