Thank you so much!! Jane is an interesting person.
Here are the edited parts:
00:40 - with even simulated interest.
3:28 - Removed the word "the".
15:14 - insisting that France in wartime was no place for an untrained girl.
06:09 - Removed the word "the".
06:29 - Removed the word "that".
09:25 - Removed the word "and".
11:32 - I've two daughters of my own.
11:45 - A word to a single living soul and you'll end your usefulness.
11:55 - He'll explain everything to you. Promise me you'll see him.
12:14 - turning on his heel and vanishing speedily as if afraid
14:15 - to submit to it
17:04 - there were no intimacies between mother and daughter.
18:09 - As soon as I've paid my check we'll go.
19:10 - tea-time in an exclusive hotel.
19:45 - picturing him as a hunted criminal fleeing from the law.
21:29 - His flaxen hair was neatly trimmed
Thanks!