Section 1 sounds great! I have just a few notes:
- From 1:38 to 1:58, you read "To yesterday and to to-day...at Kingston," then start over again at "To yesterday..."
- At 12:39, there's a stumble at "as Ralph himself set me"
- At 15:27, "we couldn't do our carting because the smugglers had given us notice," you say "we couldn't do our carting down our blinds because the smugglers had given us notice"
I haven't read this one yet. I think it's gonna be good!
Complete-SOLO "Romance", by Joseph Conrad and Ford Madox Ford-ag
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I left some questions, BTW, over on "Nature of a Crime", in my efforts to figure out how to "put in titles".
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I left some questions, BTW, over on "Nature of a Crime", in my efforts to figure out how to "put in titles".
My name is Mark
If you click on the box in the Title column beside each section number, you can enter a section title.
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
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My name is Mark
Section 2 is nicely done! I have just two notes:
- At 2:16, "I whispered loudly," you say "I whistled loudly"
- At 11:43, after "Now, lads, bring 'em along," could you include the line "A voice I knew said their watchword, 'Snuff and enough,' loudly, and then, 'What's agate?'?
- At 2:16, "I whispered loudly," you say "I whistled loudly"
- At 11:43, after "Now, lads, bring 'em along," could you include the line "A voice I knew said their watchword, 'Snuff and enough,' loudly, and then, 'What's agate?'?
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
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My name is Mark
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This is rollicking good fun, isn't it? Hard to believe this is the same author as "Fifth Queen", let alone "Crime".
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This is rollicking good fun, isn't it? Hard to believe this is the same author as "Fifth Queen", let alone "Crime".
My name is Mark
Thanks for your patience! Section 3 sounds great. I have only two notes:
- At 11:10, "and he'd not like to have spent the night in your company," you say "and he's not like to have spent the night in your company"
- At 16:12, "I don't like your company," you say "I don't like their company"
Ford's versatility is astonishing! Once I'd read Parade's End, The Fifth Queen, and his early fairy tales, I was struck by how different they all are from each other.
- At 11:10, "and he'd not like to have spent the night in your company," you say "and he's not like to have spent the night in your company"
- At 16:12, "I don't like your company," you say "I don't like their company"
Ford's versatility is astonishing! Once I'd read Parade's End, The Fifth Queen, and his early fairy tales, I was struck by how different they all are from each other.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
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My name is Mark
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Long one, eh?
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Long one, eh?
My name is Mark
Thanks again for your patience! Section 4 is nicely done. I have just a few notes:
- At 5:05, "We would go as far as we could," I hear "We could go as far as we could"
- At 5:37, "But he, at least, if we went down together," I hear "But he, at least, if he went down together"
- At 8:18, "had a rich strangeness," you say "had a strange richness"
- At 9:32, "As a rule, the place of his forearm was taken," you say "But I accepted the relationship, the place of his forearm was taken"
- At 21:26, "It was noticeable because Castro held aloof," you say "It was notable because Castro held aloof"
- At 5:05, "We would go as far as we could," I hear "We could go as far as we could"
- At 5:37, "But he, at least, if we went down together," I hear "But he, at least, if he went down together"
- At 8:18, "had a rich strangeness," you say "had a strange richness"
- At 9:32, "As a rule, the place of his forearm was taken," you say "But I accepted the relationship, the place of his forearm was taken"
- At 21:26, "It was noticeable because Castro held aloof," you say "It was notable because Castro held aloof"
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
Sarah
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My name is Mark