[COMPLETE] The Creation: A Commentary by Martin Luther - kaz

[mleigh]

I was just about finished editing Section 8 and Audacity did its thing and I lost it all.
Ho hum!

Ouch!

[GillH]

Section 8 (31:31) Chapter 1 at last! pages 26 - 37
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_08_luther_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Note on section 3

At about 12:00 I believe an "end footnote" should be inserted after "3, Upper Islington Terrace, London, February 2, 1857." and before "Should the present Translator not be so favoured".

That is the really long footnote.

Well done.

M

[GillH]

Thanks!
I've decided instead to take out the "footnote" marker at 3:45 because
a) he hasn't referenced it as a footnote per se in the main text
b) it's soooooo long that I think listeners would be confused - keep waiting for it to be closed.
It's a bit of a waffle, but I think it sits okay as 'main text', especially since he 'introduces' it as a bit of a tangent.

What do you think?

Edited Section 3 (25:33)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_03_luther_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Section 5 (7:59)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_05_luther_128kb.mp3
Martin Luther to the godly reader

Section 4 is PL OK.

Just one very small fix for section 5:
needs about 0.5 second of silence added to the start.

Ran out of time to listen to more. Will get to tomorrow.

Your reading is continuing to be very high quality.

M

[GillH]

Thanks a lot!
Edited Section 5 (8:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_05_luther_128kb.mp3

Don't feel rushed. I'm on holiday this week, so I've been able to get through a few sections!

Although I now seem to have lost my sound, so that might be it for a while.........

[GillH]

Section 9 (20:39) First Day Part 2, to page 44
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_09_luther_128kb.mp3

...which made me realise I didn't say "Part 1" for Section 8, so here is the edited Section 8 (still 31:31)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_08_luther_128kb.mp3

[GillH]

Section 10 (29:09) Chapter 1: The Work of the Second Day to page 54
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_10_luther_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Thanks!
I've decided instead to take out the "footnote" marker at 3:45 because
a) he hasn't referenced it as a footnote per se in the main text
b) it's soooooo long that I think listeners would be confused - keep waiting for it to be closed.
It's a bit of a waffle, but I think it sits okay as 'main text', especially since he 'introduces' it as a bit of a tangent.

What do you think?

Edited Section 3 (25:33)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_03_luther_128kb.mp3

That works perfectly fine for me.

Sections 3, 5, 8, and 9 are PL OK.

Notes for section 6 and 7 . Again, just one minor comment for each section.

section 6: at about 4:03 I hear "but" instead of "nor" in "nor to destruction only." definitely changes the meaning.

section 7: please delete about 2 seconds of silence at the end.

I'll get to 10 tomorrow. You are hard to keep up with.

M

[GillH]

Woops! Thanks.

Edited Section 7 (8:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_07_luther_128kb.mp3

Edited Section 6 (still 37:26)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_06_luther_128kb.mp3

That's so weird how you can read the same thing over and over and not see the mistake! I did wonder at that phrase, but I thought that I have to be true to the original text and maybe I just don't understand it! Just a 'little' change of meaning .......

[GillH]

Section 11 (24:26) The work of the third day, pages 55 - 63
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_11_luther_128kb.mp3

Section 12 (21:40) The work of the fourth day, pages 64 - 71
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_12_luther_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Woops! Thanks.

Edited Section 7 (8:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_07_luther_128kb.mp3

Edited Section 6 (still 37:26)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_06_luther_128kb.mp3

That's so weird how you can read the same thing over and over and not see the mistake! I did wonder at that phrase, but I thought that I have to be true to the original text and maybe I just don't understand it! Just a 'little' change of meaning .......

Sections 6 and 7 as well as section 10 are all PL OK.

M

[mleigh]

Section 11 (24:26) The work of the third day, pages 55 - 63
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_11_luther_128kb.mp3

Section 12 (21:40) The work of the fourth day, pages 64 - 71
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_12_luther_128kb.mp3

Notes for section 11. There are two spots with partial text, then followed by the corrected version.
6:11 please delete "by speaking" as it is followed by the correction "by working"
8:51 please delete "of the omnip" as it is followed by the correction "of the omnipotent"

I'll get to 12 in a bit but wanted to get these comments to you after finishing the listening.

M

[GillH]

Thank you!
Edited Section 11 (24:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_11_luther_128kb.mp3

[mleigh]

Thank you!
Edited Section 11 (24:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/creation_11_luther_128kb.mp3

Sections 11 and 12 are both PL OK.

M