COMPLETE Via Berlin, by Crittenden Marriott - icequeen

Post by **icequeen** » January 14th, 2023, 9:00 pm

Chapter 21 is PL OK! Such a choice!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » January 18th, 2023, 7:16 pm

Chapter 22.

Post by **icequeen** » January 19th, 2023, 9:42 pm

Chapter 22 is PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » January 23rd, 2023, 4:26 pm

Chapter 23.

Post by **icequeen** » January 23rd, 2023, 9:30 pm

Chapter 23 is PL OK! She made the right choice!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » January 25th, 2023, 7:14 pm

Chapter 24. Well, she ain't outta the woods yet, Ann!

Post by **icequeen** » January 25th, 2023, 9:40 pm

Chapter 24 is PL OK! Oh no, things are starting to get really interesting, and exciting!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » January 28th, 2023, 6:34 pm

Chapter 25.
Not bad writing, but IMO the chapters seem kind of disconnected from each other.

Post by **icequeen** » January 28th, 2023, 9:48 pm

Chapter 25 is PL OK!

They may tie together pretty soon, with a nice bow on top!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » February 1st, 2023, 6:29 pm

Chapter 26.

Post by **icequeen** » February 2nd, 2023, 10:04 pm

Chapter 26 is PL OK!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » February 7th, 2023, 7:23 am

Chapter 27. Exciting one.

I put in the blurb with the usual thought that it might get amended before we're done. Any thoughts about it so far?

Post by **icequeen** » February 7th, 2023, 5:08 pm

Leesma wrote: ↑February 7th, 2023, 7:23 am Chapter 27. Exciting one.

I put in the blurb with the usual thought that it might get amended before we're done. Any thoughts about it so far?

So far so good! I did paste it where it needs to go, but I will check one more time before I catalog.

Post by **icequeen** » February 7th, 2023, 9:36 pm

Chapter 27 is PL OK! Hold on to your hats!

Leesma · Post by **Leesma** » February 10th, 2023, 8:53 am

Chapter 28. One to go.

I just tweaked the blurb a bit. Can't think what else to say. If you can, be my guest!