[COMPLETE][SOLO]Book of Evelyn by Geraldine Bonner - kit

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » January 4th, 2023, 5:04 am

Chapter 8 needs one pick up for a spot PL:

At 3:03 "came into my mind" should be "came into my head".

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » January 14th, 2023, 9:18 pm

Chapter 8 ready for spot PL. Chapter 9 still being edited.

I'm so slow at editing and mastering.....

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_08_bonner_128kb.mp3 (10:46)

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » January 15th, 2023, 3:54 pm

Chapter 8 is PL OK!

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » January 17th, 2023, 1:26 pm

Section 9 is up: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_09_bonner_128kb.mp3 (28:18)

Thanks.

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » January 17th, 2023, 9:18 pm

Section 9 is PL OK

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » February 6th, 2023, 10:25 pm

Section 10 is up - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_10_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time: 25:34)

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » February 7th, 2023, 2:57 am

Section 10 needs a Spot PL. I think that you've done an accidental repeat while editing. It happens! I've done it myself a few times.

At 21:34 -21:42 “If I’d only myself to think of I’d let her stay if it was the bubonic plague. But I won’t expose the rest of you to any danger.”

should be changed to:

"“I’m only thinking of you, my lodgers are always my first consideration. If any of you got anything I’d never forgive myself.”

Then : She reached the last last flight...[NOT a correction here. Giving it for context. This is a complex pick up.]

I hope that I have this pickup right. This is a complex one.

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » February 8th, 2023, 5:08 pm

lightcrystal wrote: ↑February 7th, 2023, 2:57 am Section 10 needs a Spot PL. I think that you've done an accidental repeat while editing. It happens! I've done it myself a few times.

At 21:34 -21:42 “If I’d only myself to think of I’d let her stay if it was the bubonic plague. But I won’t expose the rest of you to any danger.”

should be changed to:

"“I’m only thinking of you, my lodgers are always my first consideration. If any of you got anything I’d never forgive myself.”

Then : She reached the last last flight...[NOT a correction here. Giving it for context. This is a complex pick up.]

I hope that I have this pickup right. This is a complex one.

Thanks for this, I'll get this done soon.

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » February 27th, 2023, 12:28 am

Hi!

Chapter 10 corrected: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_10_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time stays the same)

Chapter 11 uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_11_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time 21:20)

Chapter 12 uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_12_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time 21:52)

Thank you.

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » February 27th, 2023, 1:16 am

VOjamie wrote: ↑February 27th, 2023, 12:28 am Hi!

Chapter 10 corrected: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_10_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time stays the same)

Chapter 11 uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_11_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time 21:20)

Chapter 12 uploaded: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_12_bonner_128kb.mp3 (Time 21:52)

Thank you.

That is great! Let me have a look tomorrow.

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » February 27th, 2023, 10:22 pm

Chapters 10, 11 and 12 all PL OK!

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » March 20th, 2023, 11:18 pm

Chapter 13 and 14 are kinda sad....

Chapter 13 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_13_bonner_128kb.mp3 (18:46)
Chapter 14 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_14_bonner_128kb.mp3 (24:38)

Ready for PL.

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » March 21st, 2023, 1:29 am

VOjamie wrote: ↑March 20th, 2023, 11:18 pm Chapter 13 and 14 are kinda sad....

Chapter 13 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_13_bonner_128kb.mp3 (18:46)
Chapter 14 - https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_14_bonner_128kb.mp3 (24:38)

Ready for PL.

Chapter 13 is PL OK.

Chapter 14 is Spot PL: at 8:10 the line is missed out: “The women to succeed in that have got to be aggressive, fight their way like men. She never could do it.”

VOjamie · Post by **VOjamie** » March 26th, 2023, 7:04 pm

Corrected Section 14 and it's now 24:45

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_14_bonner_128kb.mp3

lightcrystal · Post by **lightcrystal** » March 26th, 2023, 8:41 pm

VOjamie wrote: ↑March 26th, 2023, 7:04 pm Corrected Section 14 and it's now 24:45

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bookofevelyn_14_bonner_128kb.mp3

Section 14 is PL OK! Now you're 2/3rd of the way through!