COMPLETE: Death Comes for the Archbishop by Willa Cather - dc

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » January 16th, 2023, 5:36 pm

Section 6 is ready. It is "Book 2, Chapter 1". I hope I did the title correctly.

Post by **mightyfelix** » January 19th, 2023, 9:19 pm

carolpelster wrote: ↑January 16th, 2023, 5:36 pm Section 6 is ready. It is "Book 2, Chapter 1". I hope I did the title correctly.

This was a sweet chapter.

PL ok.

As to the title, it sounds good to me! If I were you, I would change the introductions of the first 4 to include "Book 1" in the recording, for the sake of consistency. For that matter, I'd say "Prologue" in the first section rather than "Section 1." But it's not absolutely necessary, in either case. And it's totally your decision!

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » January 22nd, 2023, 6:01 pm

The next section is ready. I think I will follow your suggestion about chapter titles, as soon as I can get around to making those changes.

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » January 25th, 2023, 10:30 am

The next chapter is ready. I also made some small changes to the first 5 sections to try to keep naming of Books and Chapters more consistent. I took out all mention of section numbers.

Post by **mightyfelix** » January 27th, 2023, 12:32 pm

carolpelster wrote: ↑January 25th, 2023, 10:30 am The next chapter is ready. I also made some small changes to the first 5 sections to try to keep naming of Books and Chapters more consistent. I took out all mention of section numbers.

I only had time for the Spot PLs just now. The first four sections sound great! I don't hear "Book 1" at the beginning of section 5.

You might also consider adding "Book 1" to the section titles in the MW.

I hope to have time for the next two chapters this weekend, but I don't know for sure.

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » January 28th, 2023, 7:10 pm

The next 2 chapters are ready.

I am feeling a strange but very strong desire to go to New Mexico and visit the pueblos, especially Acoma!

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » February 2nd, 2023, 10:17 am

A couple more sections are ready.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 5th, 2023, 8:07 pm

I finally had a good chunk of time to enjoy this story! Sections 7-12 are all PL ok!

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » February 7th, 2023, 7:33 pm

I added sections 14 and 15, but I also realized that i haven't recorded Book 4 chapter 2 yet, so that will be coming soon.

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » February 14th, 2023, 6:50 pm

Sections up through #17 are now ready.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 14th, 2023, 7:37 pm

Great! I will probably not get to them until the weekend.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 16th, 2023, 7:49 pm

Section 5, 13, 14 all PL ok. That's all I had time for tonight. I am really enjoying this book a lot!

carolpelster · Post by **carolpelster** » February 17th, 2023, 5:57 pm

Book 7 Chapter 1 is ready.
I am glad you are enjoying the book. Me, too. Willa Cather's characters are very human, and I feel that she really loves them.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 24th, 2023, 6:26 pm

15-16 PL ok.

Post by **mightyfelix** » February 24th, 2023, 7:40 pm

And 17-19 also PL ok.