Complete-GROUP: The Wing of Azrael, Volume 3, by Mona Caird-ag

[BrizeCrize]

Thanks again for this chapter! Nicely done, as always. I have just a few notes:

- At 3:47, "sombre and solemn," I hear "sombre and silent" (p. 109)
- At 4:05, "and went forward with her eyes fixed on the floor," you say "and went forward with her eyes fixed on the door" (p. 110)
- At 4:54, "conscience was defeated," I hear "conscious was defeated" (p. 110)
- At 8:33, "Then out in the dusk," you say "Then out in the dark" (p. 113)
- At 10:14, "I offer no obstruction," you say "I offer no observation" (p. 114)
- At 16:50, "with your former lover," I hear "which your former lover" (p. 120)
- At 18:01, "Philip was expected to call at Fir Dell," I hear "Philip was expected to call Fir Dell" (p. 121)

Well, glad I stopped over for a dose of 'special' PL to tune up my eyes and ears a bit! Only one that I recall being SLIGHTLY conscious of (but my conscience let me pass on checking) was that common bugaboo of #3. "Did I mess that up...no,no I got it"..NOT. Sorry to keep you so busy typing, your work is greatly appreciated! The correct words must've been bigger ones, as now it's 20:43.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_06_caird_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Brize

[Scarbo]

Well, glad I stopped over for a dose of 'special' PL to tune up my eyes and ears a bit! Only one that I recall being SLIGHTLY conscious of (but my conscience let me pass on checking) was that common bugaboo of #3. "Did I mess that up...no,no I got it"..NOT. Sorry to keep you so busy typing, your work is greatly appreciated! The correct words must've been bigger ones, as now it's 20:43.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_06_caird_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Brize

PL OK! Thank you! And thank you for your patience with my PLing.

[acousticanna]

Hello!

Here is Section 7 (Chapter 35) for your review.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_07_caird_128kb.mp3

(8:53)

Thank you.
De Anna

[Scarbo]

Hello!

Here is Section 7 (Chapter 35) for your review.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_07_caird_128kb.mp3

(8:53)

Thank you.
De Anna

Thank you for section 7! It sounds great. The only note I have is that at 4:37, "If it did come to the worst," you say "If it did not come to the worst" (p. 125).

[acousticanna]

Hi again!

I've made the correction for 4:37 and uploaded the file. It's strange what words we put in when they're not really there!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_07_caird_128kb.mp3

(8:54)

Thanks.
De Anna

[Scarbo]

Hi again!

I've made the correction for 4:37 and uploaded the file. It's strange what words we put in when they're not really there!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_07_caird_128kb.mp3

(8:54)

Thanks.
De Anna

PL OK! Thank you! And I apologize for listing the wrong page number. Not sure how that happened!

[MairiMac]

Can I take Section 5, Chapter 33? I kind of loved Chapter 32 (almost done) and want to continue.

[Scarbo]

Can I take Section 5, Chapter 33? I kind of loved Chapter 32 (almost done) and want to continue.

Certainly! Thank you for claiming!

[BrizeCrize]

Could I sign up for another one over here, please? The title of section 8 catches my eye, 'The Whirlpool of Fate' (hopefully SLIGHTLY less grim than 'In Grim Earnest' ) Thank you.

[Scarbo]

Could I sign up for another one over here, please? The title of section 8 catches my eye, 'The Whirlpool of Fate' (hopefully SLIGHTLY less grim than 'In Grim Earnest' ) Thank you.

By all means! Thank you for claiming!

[MairiMac]

Here's Section 4, Chapter 32

38:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_32_caird_128kb.mp3

[Scarbo]

Thank you for section 4, MairiMac! I should be able to have it PL'd by the end of tomorrow.

[BrizeCrize]

Section 8, Whirlpool of Fate, attached:

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_08_caird_128kb.mp3

Whew! These longer chapters show how much physical strength is needed for simply vocalizing (including appropriate modulation for dialogue and story-line, of course). Came in at 39:57 (not including my little walks, of course).

Thank you,
Brize

[Scarbo]

Thank you, Brize! I'll most likely have section 8 PL'd by the end of tomorrow.

There's no way I'd be able to record a 40-minute chapter in one sitting! Ten minutes is pushing it.

[Scarbo]

Here's Section 4, Chapter 32

38:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/wingofazraelvol3_32_caird_128kb.mp3

Thanks again for section 4! It's nicely done, and I enjoyed the different voices you gave the characters. I have just a few notes:

- Could you change the filename to wingofazraelvol3_04_caird_128kb? (It does get a bit confusing between section numbers and chapter numbers.)
- At 1:25, "My love for you before your marriage," you say "My love for you before marriage" (p. 65)
- At 12:38, "They could feel his presence among them," you say "She could feel his presence among them" (p. 74)
- At 28:26, could you include the "Hush!" before "do you hear that"? (p. 87)
- At 38:14, "there was a black unconsciousness," I hear "there was a black consciousness" (p. 96)