[COMPLETE] The Haunted Island by E. H. Visiak - icequeen

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » February 2nd, 2023, 4:12 pm

11 through 16 are up!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 2nd, 2023, 5:07 pm

flavo5000 wrote: ↑February 2nd, 2023, 4:12 pm 11 through 16 are up!

ok, on my list.

Post by **brownrottger** » February 2nd, 2023, 6:06 pm

Chapter 11 is PL ok.

Chapter 12:
0:04 should be "Chapter 12 of the Haunted Island"; I heard "Chapter 12 of the Haunted Sea"

Post by **brownrottger** » February 2nd, 2023, 7:18 pm

Chapter 13:
3:08 should be "I supped that night with my brother"; I heard "I supposed that night with my brother"

Post by **brownrottger** » February 2nd, 2023, 7:45 pm

Chapters 14 - 16 are PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » February 3rd, 2023, 8:39 am

brownrottger wrote: ↑February 2nd, 2023, 7:18 pm Chapter 13:
3:08 should be "I supped that night with my brother"; I heard "I supposed that night with my brother"

12 and 13 should be fixed now! Honestly I'm surprised I've messed up as little as I have on this one. It's one of the trickier books I've read with all its archaic language.

Post by **brownrottger** » February 3rd, 2023, 9:03 am

flavo5000 wrote: ↑February 3rd, 2023, 8:39 am
brownrottger wrote: ↑February 2nd, 2023, 7:18 pm Chapter 13:
3:08 should be "I supped that night with my brother"; I heard "I supposed that night with my brother"
12 and 13 should be fixed now! Honestly I'm surprised I've messed up as little as I have on this one. It's one of the trickier books I've read with all its archaic language.

You're doing a fantastic job with it!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 3rd, 2023, 9:05 am

Sections 12 and 13 are PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » February 3rd, 2023, 4:12 pm

17 through 23 are up!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 3rd, 2023, 4:57 pm

flavo5000 wrote: ↑February 3rd, 2023, 4:12 pm 17 through 23 are up!

Great!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 4th, 2023, 8:39 am

Sections 17-23 are PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » February 4th, 2023, 9:42 am

24 through 29 are up!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 4th, 2023, 11:50 am

Sections 24-28 are PL ok.

Section 29
3:27 remove word "how" not in text. Should be "curious to know many things concerning him"
4:21-4:24 shorten unnatural silence

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » February 4th, 2023, 1:38 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑February 4th, 2023, 11:50 am Sections 24-28 are PL ok.

Section 29
3:27 remove word "how" not in text. Should be "curious to know many things concerning him"
4:21-4:24 shorten unnatural silence

Should be fixed now

Post by **brownrottger** » February 4th, 2023, 2:14 pm

Section 29 is PL ok.