Thank you! It is now PL OK!
PL notes for section 6:
@0:26 - Optional: A small entangling of lines/repeat of word The text reads: "At present, where the upper asure clears, But that the Nebulae will yet unshroud?"
I hear, "At present but where the upper asure clears, but that the Nebulae will yet unshroud?"
@1:36 - Optional: Stumble - Text reads, "all that thou couldst create," I hear "all thought- thou- couldst create."
Sections 7-9 are PL OK!
PL notes for section 10:
@0:30 - Missed edit. I think you snapped your finger, if that's true, then we correct ourselves the same way
I enjoy your reading very much! Very good job!