Welcome to the LibraVox family and I hope you will enjoy yourself here.
The recording was very well done, but there are a couple of things in the recording that you should fix:
5:57.5
They hastened to give her a warm draught and to put her in her bed In this context, the pronunciation of the word is like '
draft', meaning a drink of something. It is a typically British spelling. The word you used is spelled dr
ought
Your volume is at 85.9 dB. The volume we aim for at LV is 89.0 dB with a range of about 2 dB on each side of that. I know that you are new here, and there is a little program called Checker that will show you, among other things, the volume of the recording. Here is a link to let you know where to get it and how to use it:
https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php/Checker
To increase the volume in the recording, load it into Audacity, highlight the entire recording (there are a couple of easy ways. One just hit “control 'a' “, or at the bottom of the blue panel at the left, you will see a button called 'select'. Click on that and that will also highlight the recording.) Then click on the “Effect” button on the top bar, choose 'Amplify' at the top of the drop down menu, then enter 3, since that is how many dBs you want to increase your recording, then hit 'Enter', and Audacity will increase your recording to 88.9 dB.
I really enjoyed your recording. One little observation for future recordings, you can leave a little less time between paragraphs so the ideas continue to flow smoothly. Usually not more than one second works.
Thanks,
Wayne