Editing! [DR] The Year When Stardust Fell - philc

loon · Post by **loon** » January 23rd, 2023, 8:20 pm

quartertone wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 6:07 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3
0:21

In the last line, everyone else is pronouncing Hilliard as "Hill-Ee-ard"

loon · Post by **loon** » January 23rd, 2023, 8:31 pm

quartertone wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 6:07 pm Ok, here are my sections.
I checked back in the forum posts, and it does appear that brownrottger did request Guard 3 in section 16, so I did not supply that voice.

I put the updated credits at the beginning of the Mark Wilson file.

Also, I did perform de-clicking and de-essing, and removed any DC offest, but otherwise the audio is "raw". The low noise floor is due to an upgraded recording space!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3
0:21

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_defender_14.mp3
0:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_markwilson_14.mp3
1:03

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_nomad2_14.mp3
0:09

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_parkin_15.mp3
0:09

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_worker_19.mp3
0:25

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_worryguy_19.mp3
0:12

All the lines in chapters 14, 15 and 19 are PL OK, thanks.

quartertone · Post by **quartertone** » January 23rd, 2023, 10:59 pm

loon wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 8:20 pm
quartertone wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 6:07 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3
0:21
In the last line, everyone else is pronouncing Hilliard as "Hill-Ee-ard"

Oops, I misread that.

The corrected version is uploaded.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3

(also: I accidentally uploaded https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3.mp3 - with two ".mp3" in the name, so that one can be deleted)

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » January 24th, 2023, 12:50 am

Do you still need something from me for Narrator in Chapter 20?

loon · Post by **loon** » January 24th, 2023, 6:50 am

quartertone wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 10:59 pm Oops, I misread that.

That's OK - I was typing Hilliard without that second 'i' in early versions of the scripts.

quartertone wrote: ↑January 23rd, 2023, 10:59 pm The corrected version is uploaded.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3

(also: I accidentally uploaded https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_guard_13.mp3.mp3 - with two ".mp3" in the name, so that one can be deleted)

All your sections are now checked in and are PL OK. Thanks for all the voices.
As for the .mp3.mp3 file, I believe that's something that will get cleaned up when the book is published. Removing files from the server is something that requires Mystical Admin Powers, so it's out of my hands.

loon · Post by **loon** » January 24th, 2023, 6:53 am

silverquill wrote: ↑January 24th, 2023, 12:50 am Do you still need something from me for Narrator in Chapter 20?

Larry, I'll carefully review the narrator lines for chapter 20 once I'm fully awake.

loon · Post by **loon** » January 24th, 2023, 6:59 am

I'm claiming 'Woodcutter' in chapter 14. The parts for the book are now fully assigned.

Progress!

brownrottger · Post by **brownrottger** » January 24th, 2023, 7:50 am

loon wrote: ↑January 24th, 2023, 6:59 am I'm claiming 'Woodcutter' in chapter 14. The parts for the book are now fully assigned.

Progress!

Yay!!

brownrottger · Post by **brownrottger** » January 24th, 2023, 7:55 pm

Here is John Sykes revised. Let me know if this is ok. I can always do it over. https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_johnsykes_14.mp3 0:41
Best,
Christine

loon · Post by **loon** » January 24th, 2023, 8:17 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑January 24th, 2023, 7:55 pm Here is John Sykes revised. Let me know if this is ok. I can always do it over. https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_johnsykes_14.mp3

Thank you Christine - it's now PL OK.

loon · Post by **loon** » January 24th, 2023, 8:21 pm

loon wrote: ↑January 24th, 2023, 6:53 am
silverquill wrote: ↑January 24th, 2023, 12:50 am Do you still need something from me for Narrator in Chapter 20?
Larry, I'll carefully review the narrator lines for chapter 20 once I'm fully awake.

Your lines in chapter 20 are all PL OK. I think I just neglected to mark them in the Magic Window the first time I checked them.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 27th, 2023, 11:59 am

Here is Dr. French and the updated voice credit:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_drfrench_12.mp3
2:03

loon · Post by **loon** » January 27th, 2023, 2:41 pm

jennlea wrote: ↑January 27th, 2023, 11:59 am Here is Dr. French and the updated voice credit:

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_drfrench_12.mp3
2:03

Thank you Jenn. PL OK.

loon · Post by **loon** » January 29th, 2023, 5:23 pm

Chapter 12 is ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_12_jones_128kb.mp3
length 21:11

A bunch of things happen in this chapter - much of southern California is burned up in rioting - townsfolk start grumbling - Prof. Maddox cracks the problem of cleaning contaminated metal.

Ken has a flashback of something his dad said earlier - I tried a more subtle echo for this. Redrun, if this sounds better to you I'll go back and change the Mr. Allen flashback in chapter 9.

loon · Post by **loon** » January 29th, 2023, 7:37 pm

It's two for one night in Mayfield: Chapter 13 is ready for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/yearwhenstardustfell_13_jones_128kb.mp3
length is 18:55

A pretty straightforward chapter - bad guys arrive and want to take everything.