brownrottger wrote: ↑December 26th, 2022, 4:42 pm
Section 1 just one note:
4:00 should be "with lips of a deep blood colour"; I heard "with lips of a deep blue colour"
Your s's did not sound whistley to me.
Thanks!
Christine
brownrottger wrote: ↑December 26th, 2022, 4:42 pm
Section 1 just one note:
4:00 should be "with lips of a deep blood colour"; I heard "with lips of a deep blue colour"
Your s's did not sound whistley to me.
Thanks!
Christine
brownrottger wrote: ↑December 26th, 2022, 4:42 pm
Section 1 just one note:
4:00 should be "with lips of a deep blood colour"; I heard "with lips of a deep blue colour"
Your s's did not sound whistley to me.
Thanks!
Christine
Section 7 well read! Just a couple notes:
5:53 remove error "acquaintanced the baron" corrected immediately following.
32:20 should be "if you'll take charge of me"; I heard "if you'll take care of me"
brownrottger wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 8:08 pm
Section 7 well read! Just a couple notes:
5:53 remove error "acquaintanced the baron" corrected immediately following.
32:20 should be "if you'll take charge of me"; I heard "if you'll take care of me"
brownrottger wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 8:08 pm
Section 7 well read! Just a couple notes:
5:53 remove error "acquaintanced the baron" corrected immediately following.
32:20 should be "if you'll take charge of me"; I heard "if you'll take care of me"