Chapter 4 is PL OK
[COMPLETE] The Master Mind of Mars by Edgar Rice Burroughs - tg
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Chapter 5
PL Notes:
Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.
I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!
PL Notes:
Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.
I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!
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Do you know how to get into the Magic Window to change the status of the sections you've done?HopesUnicorn wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:11 pm Chapter 5
PL Notes:
Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.
I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Hope,
Chapter 5 or Section 5 (Chapter 4)?
Chapter 5 or Section 5 (Chapter 4)?
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Chapter 5, (danger) my apologies.
Chapter 6 (Suspicions) PL Notes:
08:35 it sounds like the sentence is cut on top of itself. "He whos brain had been divided with an ape..."
08:40 Step over. Same as above. The sentence seems to be snipped in a space that was needed and moves it unnaturally forward.
21:00 There are several instances where there are long pauses between snippets of the sentence.
If I may ask, someone else take a listen to these sections and see if they warrant fixing.
I am having such a time listening to these chapters!
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Chapter 7 (Escape) PL OK
(ooohhhh! To be but staring down the barrel of a carbine when so close you are to escape!!!)
(ooohhhh! To be but staring down the barrel of a carbine when so close you are to escape!!!)
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Chapter 8 (Hands up!) PL OK
I have never actually read an ERB book before and now I feel like I missed out.
I have never actually read an ERB book before and now I feel like I missed out.
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Chapter 5 - I can't hear what you are referring to. So it must be so slight, as not to warrant an amendment. I have checked from 6:50 to 7:10
Chapter 6 - Amended
Two items:
1) I don't believe there is anyone else that is that is listening to this after you during the DPL. So you and I will figure it out.
and 2) some of this flowing is relating to personal style, and at times how this man writes his stories: some are run-on sentences that need to be broken up. and MANY commas. In fact, at one sentence, I am convinced they forgot to publish a Period (I recently recorded The Federalist Papers on my YouTube channel: that Alexander Hamilton has SO MANY commas in his sentences that getting the actual flow of a certain sentence took an ACTIVE concentration on my part, to get it to work.) =)
Two items:
1) I don't believe there is anyone else that is that is listening to this after you during the DPL. So you and I will figure it out.
and 2) some of this flowing is relating to personal style, and at times how this man writes his stories: some are run-on sentences that need to be broken up. and MANY commas. In fact, at one sentence, I am convinced they forgot to publish a Period (I recently recorded The Federalist Papers on my YouTube channel: that Alexander Hamilton has SO MANY commas in his sentences that getting the actual flow of a certain sentence took an ACTIVE concentration on my part, to get it to work.) =)
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Ah. Run on sentences are the worst! I will listen with more understanding now! It is quite an interesting listen and your voice is so nice! I am rather enjoying this DPL experience. Thank youJoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 7:42 am Chapter 6 - Amended
Two items:
1) I don't believe there is anyone else that is that is listening to this after you during the DPL. So you and I will figure it out.
and 2) some of this flowing is relating to personal style, and at times how this man writes his stories: some are run-on sentences that need to be broken up. and MANY commas. In fact, at one sentence, I am convinced they forgot to publish a Period (I recently recorded The Federalist Papers on my YouTube channel: that Alexander Hamilton has SO MANY commas in his sentences that getting the actual flow of a certain sentence took an ACTIVE concentration on my part, to get it to work.) =)
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Thank you for the Compliment! I've been trying hard over the years. (I want to make this a career, if I can)
When you're done here, feel free to check out the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@JCDeNoia/playlists
Always on the lookout for new subscribers! Over 400 audio files on there, from my work here, and what I have done on the side. (Most recent work certainly sound better than my earlier work)
When you're done here, feel free to check out the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@JCDeNoia/playlists
Always on the lookout for new subscribers! Over 400 audio files on there, from my work here, and what I have done on the side. (Most recent work certainly sound better than my earlier work)
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I have subscribed and am going to dive into Edgar Allen Poe! I so love his works.JoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 8:54 am Thank you for the Compliment! I've been trying hard over the years. (I want to make this a career, if I can)
When you're done here, feel free to check out the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@JCDeNoia/playlists
Always on the lookout for new subscribers! Over 400 audio files on there, from my work here, and what I have done on the side. (Most recent work certainly sound better than my earlier work)
ALL REMAINING chapters: PL OK
(I don't know how to access the MW/have access)
Thank you so much for your rendition of this story. It was a wonderous listen and I so enjoyed it.
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I do not.TriciaG wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:43 pmDo you know how to get into the Magic Window to change the status of the sections you've done?HopesUnicorn wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:11 pm Chapter 5
PL Notes:
Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.
I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!
Things I'm working on:
Editing: None.
Recording: Soldiers | Super Secret Solo Project
Fixing: None
I will PL for you if it is ready. Just pm me a link to the thread.
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If you're going to do more DPL'ing, it's a very useful thing to have.(I don't know how to access the MW/have access)
Detailed Instructions for accessing the Magic Window can be found in the document linked here:
Instructions for DPLs
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School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
Hope: Thanks for the good work on this! And much appreciated the Sub!!! (spread the word lol!)
Tricia: Here is the Intro for you:
Across the the vast reaches of space went he: another man of Earth (Ulysses Paxton) finds himself transported to Mars ("Barsoom"), following in the footsteps of the legendary John Carter. Originally imprisoned by a mad scientist on Mars who unlocked the secret of eternal life by transferring one's brain into a new body...thereby living forever: Ulysses embarks on an adventure to return an enslaved woman's mind back to her own body - a body taken by a tyrannical Empress of one of the greater cities of Barsoom! Gathering together the most unlikely group of allies: a native Great White Ape of Barsoom who has half of a brain of a man, then a soldier whose own body was sold for replacement for longevity to a prince of the Empress, and a lastly a notable assassin: the desperate cadre fight madly to restore everyone's lives to what they once were. To where will this adventure take them on this savage, and far-away planet? Join Edgar Rice Burroughs as he takes us once more to Mars for an adventure unlike any you have experienced before!
Tricia: Here is the Intro for you:
Across the the vast reaches of space went he: another man of Earth (Ulysses Paxton) finds himself transported to Mars ("Barsoom"), following in the footsteps of the legendary John Carter. Originally imprisoned by a mad scientist on Mars who unlocked the secret of eternal life by transferring one's brain into a new body...thereby living forever: Ulysses embarks on an adventure to return an enslaved woman's mind back to her own body - a body taken by a tyrannical Empress of one of the greater cities of Barsoom! Gathering together the most unlikely group of allies: a native Great White Ape of Barsoom who has half of a brain of a man, then a soldier whose own body was sold for replacement for longevity to a prince of the Empress, and a lastly a notable assassin: the desperate cadre fight madly to restore everyone's lives to what they once were. To where will this adventure take them on this savage, and far-away planet? Join Edgar Rice Burroughs as he takes us once more to Mars for an adventure unlike any you have experienced before!