[COMPLETE] The Master Mind of Mars by Edgar Rice Burroughs - tg

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 5th, 2023, 1:48 pm

JoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 4th, 2023, 7:28 pm Well I'm sure both can listen to these chapters for DPL.
It is a community, after all

Chapter 4 is PL OK

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 5th, 2023, 2:11 pm

Chapter 5

PL Notes:

Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.

I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!

Post by **TriciaG** » January 5th, 2023, 2:43 pm

HopesUnicorn wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:11 pm Chapter 5

PL Notes:

Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.

I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!

Do you know how to get into the Magic Window to change the status of the sections you've done?

JoeDeNoia · Post by **JoeDeNoia** » January 5th, 2023, 5:47 pm

Hope,

Chapter 5 or Section 5 (Chapter 4)?

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 5th, 2023, 8:07 pm

JoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 5:47 pm Hope,

Chapter 5 or Section 5 (Chapter 4)?

Chapter 5, (danger) my apologies.

Chapter 6 (Suspicions) PL Notes:

08:35 it sounds like the sentence is cut on top of itself. "He whos brain had been divided with an ape..."

08:40 Step over. Same as above. The sentence seems to be snipped in a space that was needed and moves it unnaturally forward.

21:00 There are several instances where there are long pauses between snippets of the sentence.

If I may ask, someone else take a listen to these sections and see if they warrant fixing.

I am having such a time listening to these chapters!

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 5th, 2023, 8:31 pm

Chapter 7 (Escape) PL OK

(ooohhhh! To be but staring down the barrel of a carbine when so close you are to escape!!!)

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 5th, 2023, 9:23 pm

Chapter 8 (Hands up!) PL OK

I have never actually read an ERB book before and now I feel like I missed out.

JoeDeNoia · Post by **JoeDeNoia** » January 6th, 2023, 3:47 am

Chapter 5 - I can't hear what you are referring to. So it must be so slight, as not to warrant an amendment. I have checked from 6:50 to 7:10

JoeDeNoia · Post by **JoeDeNoia** » January 6th, 2023, 7:42 am

Chapter 6 - Amended

Two items:
1) I don't believe there is anyone else that is that is listening to this after you during the DPL. So you and I will figure it out.
and 2) some of this flowing is relating to personal style, and at times how this man writes his stories: some are run-on sentences that need to be broken up. and MANY commas. In fact, at one sentence, I am convinced they forgot to publish a Period (I recently recorded The Federalist Papers on my YouTube channel: that Alexander Hamilton has SO MANY commas in his sentences that getting the actual flow of a certain sentence took an ACTIVE concentration on my part, to get it to work.) =)

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 6th, 2023, 8:18 am

JoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 7:42 am Chapter 6 - Amended

Two items:
1) I don't believe there is anyone else that is that is listening to this after you during the DPL. So you and I will figure it out.
and 2) some of this flowing is relating to personal style, and at times how this man writes his stories: some are run-on sentences that need to be broken up. and MANY commas. In fact, at one sentence, I am convinced they forgot to publish a Period (I recently recorded The Federalist Papers on my YouTube channel: that Alexander Hamilton has SO MANY commas in his sentences that getting the actual flow of a certain sentence took an ACTIVE concentration on my part, to get it to work.) =)

Ah. Run on sentences are the worst! I will listen with more understanding now! It is quite an interesting listen and your voice is so nice! I am rather enjoying this DPL experience. Thank you

JoeDeNoia · Post by **JoeDeNoia** » January 6th, 2023, 8:54 am

Thank you for the Compliment! I've been trying hard over the years. (I want to make this a career, if I can)

When you're done here, feel free to check out the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@JCDeNoia/playlists
Always on the lookout for new subscribers! Over 400 audio files on there, from my work here, and what I have done on the side. (Most recent work certainly sound better than my earlier work)

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 6th, 2023, 2:15 pm

JoeDeNoia wrote: ↑January 6th, 2023, 8:54 am Thank you for the Compliment! I've been trying hard over the years. (I want to make this a career, if I can)

When you're done here, feel free to check out the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@JCDeNoia/playlists
Always on the lookout for new subscribers! Over 400 audio files on there, from my work here, and what I have done on the side. (Most recent work certainly sound better than my earlier work)

I have subscribed and am going to dive into Edgar Allen Poe! I so love his works.

ALL REMAINING chapters: PL OK

(I don't know how to access the MW/have access)

Thank you so much for your rendition of this story. It was a wonderous listen and I so enjoyed it.

HopesUnicorn · Post by **HopesUnicorn** » January 6th, 2023, 2:16 pm

TriciaG wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:43 pm
HopesUnicorn wrote: ↑January 5th, 2023, 2:11 pm Chapter 5

PL Notes:

Around 07:00 there are 2 instances of ... it sounds like a loud and quick echo... but it's on top of the first letter of the word being said. If someone could give that a second listen to determine its pertinence, I'd much appreciate it.

I am loving this book thus far! Immortality, such a feat! Such a thought!
Do you know how to get into the Magic Window to change the status of the sections you've done?

I do not.

Post by **TriciaG** » January 6th, 2023, 2:19 pm

(I don't know how to access the MW/have access)

If you're going to do more DPL'ing, it's a very useful thing to have.

Detailed Instructions for accessing the Magic Window can be found in the document linked here:
Instructions for DPLs

Holler if you have questions.

JoeDeNoia · Post by **JoeDeNoia** » January 6th, 2023, 2:44 pm

Hope: Thanks for the good work on this! And much appreciated the Sub!!! (spread the word lol!)

Tricia: Here is the Intro for you:

Across the the vast reaches of space went he: another man of Earth (Ulysses Paxton) finds himself transported to Mars ("Barsoom"), following in the footsteps of the legendary John Carter. Originally imprisoned by a mad scientist on Mars who unlocked the secret of eternal life by transferring one's brain into a new body...thereby living forever: Ulysses embarks on an adventure to return an enslaved woman's mind back to her own body - a body taken by a tyrannical Empress of one of the greater cities of Barsoom! Gathering together the most unlikely group of allies: a native Great White Ape of Barsoom who has half of a brain of a man, then a soldier whose own body was sold for replacement for longevity to a prince of the Empress, and a lastly a notable assassin: the desperate cadre fight madly to restore everyone's lives to what they once were. To where will this adventure take them on this savage, and far-away planet? Join Edgar Rice Burroughs as he takes us once more to Mars for an adventure unlike any you have experienced before!