COMPLETE: The Morality of Marriage and Other Essays on the Status and Destiny of Woman by Mona Caird -jo

czandra · Post by **czandra** » November 15th, 2022, 12:52 pm

Hi. Looks like this one is fully subscribed. It's still on the readers wanted page.

Czandra

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » December 3rd, 2022, 4:23 am

Section 5 is available again due to an expired claim. Any takers?

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » December 4th, 2022, 6:15 pm

I've uploaded the Introduction, 31:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_00_caird_128kb.mp3

I got some errors in the checker, though I followed the naming convention given...I ignored them.
The name appears to include bit rate information (128kb), but standard names do not. Help
The file name does not appear to match the ID3 metadata:
The section number does not match the title ("00" versus "Introduction").
The section number does not match the track number ("00" versus "0").

Will check back for proofreading notes.

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » December 4th, 2022, 6:19 pm

I can take section 5. Does the 2 month mark start from when I ask or when you accept my claim?

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » December 4th, 2022, 6:34 pm

SwetaB wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 6:19 pm I can take section 5. Does the 2 month mark start from when I ask or when you accept my claim?

Section 5 is all yours! Thank you for claiming! I go by two months from the date I accept a claim, though other BCs might differ.

Thank you for section 0! I'll try to have it PL'd by tomorrow, but I most likely won't be able to post any feedback until Tuesday, since the site will be down for maintenance tomorrow.

By the way, do you by any chance have your Checker validation set to Strict instead of Gentle? That might be the reason for the errors you're seeing, but I don't think they'll be anything to worry about, because Gentle validation is all that's needed.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » December 7th, 2022, 2:22 am

SwetaB wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 6:15 pm I've uploaded the Introduction, 31:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_00_caird_128kb.mp3

I got some errors in the checker, though I followed the naming convention given...I ignored them.
The name appears to include bit rate information (128kb), but standard names do not. Help
The file name does not appear to match the ID3 metadata:
The section number does not match the title ("00" versus "Introduction").
The section number does not match the track number ("00" versus "0").

Will check back for proofreading notes.

Thanks again for this chapter! This is a very nicely done first recording, and I enjoyed your expressive reading style. I have just a few notes:

- At 4:36, "One and all would be forced to submit their commissariat department," I hear "One and all would be forced to submit their commiserate department" (p. 3)
- At 6:40, "when those excrescences ceased to be esteemed," you say "when those exessences ceased to be esteemed" (p. 4)
- At 7:12, "was ever put bodily into the place of a preceding one," you say "was ever put boldly into the place of a preceding one" (p. 4)
- At 7:23, "and had the final state of affairs been foreseen by the reformers of the era," I hear "and had the final state of affairs been foreseen by the formers of the era" (p. 4)
- At 9:48, "In a recent unsigned article in The Spectator," you say "In a recent unsigned article in The Specter" (p. 5)
- At 27:49, "for the bestowal upon them of civic rights," you say "for the bestowal upon them of civil rights" (p. 15)

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » December 7th, 2022, 10:38 am

Scarbo wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 6:34 pm
Section 5 is all yours! Thank you for claiming! I go by two months from the date I accept a claim, though other BCs might differ.

Thank you for section 0! I'll try to have it PL'd by tomorrow, but I most likely won't be able to post any feedback until Tuesday, since the site will be down for maintenance tomorrow.

By the way, do you by any chance have your Checker validation set to Strict instead of Gentle? That might be the reason for the errors you're seeing, but I don't think they'll be anything to worry about, because Gentle validation is all that's needed.

Got it. Section 5, only has 6 pages, not 20. 92-97.

Also, I saw the notes on the intro. Thanks, will try to get those to you in the next few days. And yes, the validation is on Strict, will change.

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » December 8th, 2022, 6:34 pm

Uploaded Introduction with the notes applied. 31:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_00_caird_128kb.mp3
Cheers!

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » December 9th, 2022, 4:03 pm

SwetaB wrote: ↑December 8th, 2022, 6:34 pm Uploaded Introduction with the notes applied. 31:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_00_caird_128kb.mp3
Cheers!

PL OK! Thank you!

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » January 29th, 2023, 1:27 pm

Section 5 is here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_05_caird_128kb.mp3

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » January 29th, 2023, 3:10 pm

SwetaB wrote: ↑January 29th, 2023, 1:27 pm Section 5 is here: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_05_caird_128kb.mp3

Thank you! Section 5 is nicely done. I have just a few notes:

- At 5:24, "though here, there are some faint traces of the mother-age," I hear "though here, there are some faint traces of the motherage" (p. 94)
- At 5:28, "as in the asserted 'venerableness' of a mother," you say "as in the asserted 'vulnerableness' of a woman" (p. 94)
- At 5:34, "However, her extreme venerableness," you say "However, her extreme vulnerableness" (p. 94)
- At 7:03, "Still remains a defended canon," I hear "still remains a deafened canon" (p. 95)
- From 8:31 to 8:52, there's a long pause. Could you trim it down to about 1.5-2 seconds?
- At 9:10, "the one just quoted recalling the following example of similar formation," you say "the one just quoted recalling for the following example of similar formation" (p. 96)
- At 9:48, "that the tacit beliefs," I hear "that the tacit belief" (p. 96)

SwetaB · Post by **SwetaB** » February 6th, 2023, 3:30 pm

What on earth is a "deafened canon??"

This reading out loud thing is tricky eh?

Thanks for the prooflisten, see the corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_05_caird_128kb.mp3

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » February 6th, 2023, 5:39 pm

SwetaB wrote: ↑February 6th, 2023, 3:30 pm What on earth is a "deafened canon??"

This reading out loud thing is tricky eh?

Thanks for the prooflisten, see the corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/moralityofmarriage_05_caird_128kb.mp3

PL OK! Thank you!

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » February 6th, 2023, 5:45 pm

Jo, all the sections are finished, but if it's okay, I'd like a little time to double-check that all my ducks are in a row after having to do some consolidation of sections because of my goof-up with initially missing a chapter out of the MW. I'll post an update to let you know when things are ready for cataloging. I don't anticipate needing longer than the end of tomorrow. Thank you!

February 6th, 2023, 11:42 pm

That's fine.