COMPLETE: Inspector French's Greatest Case by Freeman Wills Crofts - jo

[mleigh]

PL Notes for Chapter 17

Repeated text:
3:18 "to make sure" is followed by "To make sure of this would"
5:30 " Of course if the statement is only intended" followed by correction at 5:32 "Of course if the statement was only intended"
8:42-8:48 a repeat of earlier (8:28) "Great Western Ord. ...3 pence" delete this 2nd one

The following refer to the table. I am not sure how important some of the details (e.g., bought instead of sold) in the table are, but here are my comments
9:08 after "Lyons" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:28 after "War Loan 4%" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:57 after "1039 pounds" "4 pence" needs to be added
9:58 after "Lloyds Bank" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:11 after "Maple" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:53 after "J Barker" should be "sold" not "bought" and at 10:56 should be "pence" not "pounds"
10:57 missing total bought £6935 12s 1d, total sold £9127 18s 2d, profit £2192 6s 1d

Your reading of the table was nice and clear and easy to follow.

M

[Indianreader]

Hello M

Here are sections 16 and 17

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_16_crofts_128.mp3

23'57"

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_17_crofts_128.mp3

25'50"

Thank you

Three repeats for chapter 16:

2:57-3:02 and 3:03-3:08 "He did not see that any other interpretation of the dwindling balance and the overdraft could be found."
7:51-7:54 and 7:55-7:58 "for me just to leave them and run out and get two taxis. "
15:53 you have "on the extended tour", it is corrected at 15:54 to "on an extended tour"

M

Hello M
Here is chapter 16 with the edits
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_16_crofts_128.mp3
23'46"
Thank you

[Indianreader]

PL Notes for Chapter 17

Repeated text:
3:18 "to make sure" is followed by "To make sure of this would"
5:30 " Of course if the statement is only intended" followed by correction at 5:32 "Of course if the statement was only intended"
8:42-8:48 a repeat of earlier (8:28) "Great Western Ord. ...3 pence" delete this 2nd one

The following refer to the table. I am not sure how important some of the details (e.g., bought instead of sold) in the table are, but here are my comments
9:08 after "Lyons" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:28 after "War Loan 4%" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:57 after "1039 pounds" "4 pence" needs to be added
9:58 after "Lloyds Bank" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:11 after "Maple" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:53 after "J Barker" should be "sold" not "bought" and at 10:56 should be "pence" not "pounds"
10:57 missing total bought £6935 12s 1d, total sold £9127 18s 2d, profit £2192 6s 1d

Your reading of the table was nice and clear and easy to follow.

M

Thank you for your approval! Will correct them as told.
Thank you

[mleigh]

Chapter 16 is PL OK.

M

[Indianreader]

PL Notes for Chapter 17

Repeated text:
3:18 "to make sure" is followed by "To make sure of this would"
5:30 " Of course if the statement is only intended" followed by correction at 5:32 "Of course if the statement was only intended"
8:42-8:48 a repeat of earlier (8:28) "Great Western Ord. ...3 pence" delete this 2nd one

The following refer to the table. I am not sure how important some of the details (e.g., bought instead of sold) in the table are, but here are my comments
9:08 after "Lyons" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:28 after "War Loan 4%" should be "sold" not "bought"
9:57 after "1039 pounds" "4 pence" needs to be added
9:58 after "Lloyds Bank" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:11 after "Maple" should be "sold" not "bought"
10:53 after "J Barker" should be "sold" not "bought" and at 10:56 should be "pence" not "pounds"
10:57 missing total bought £6935 12s 1d, total sold £9127 18s 2d, profit £2192 6s 1d

Your reading of the table was nice and clear and easy to follow.

M

Thank you for your approval! Will correct them as told.
Thank you

Hi
Here is the corrected chapter 17

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_17_crofts_128.mp3

25'59"

[mleigh]

Chapter 17 is PL OK.

M

[Indianreader]

French moves towards his quarry....
Here is section 18

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_18_crofts_128.mp3
24'12"

[mleigh]

French moves towards his quarry....
Here is section 18

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_18_crofts_128.mp3
24'12"

He is certainly running all over Europe. He doesn't have much time left to catch them.

Just a few fixes here:

0:29 "the indexing of information of" is repeated at 0:32
12:42 "We’ll go and look ’em up" is missing in "We’ll go and look ’em up, and perhaps see something of their police station."
13:49 and 13:50 repeat "I should certainly go to Caen"

Thanks,

M

[Indianreader]

Here is the corrected version of section 18

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_18_crofts_128.mp3

24'09"

Thank you

[Indianreader]

And here are the concluding chapters. Thank you
Hope it had been thrilling enough!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_19_crofts_128.mp3
26’00”
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_20_crofts_128.mp3
15’53”

[mleigh]

Chapters 18 and 20 are both PL OK.

Just a few corrections for Chapter 19:

6:29 "leisurely manner" is missing in "had a pleasant, leisurely manner which conveyed to the many"
12:31 " If she leaves, it will mean thather husband is not present, and I", is repeated and corrected at 12:36

Fun story.

[Indianreader]

Thank you M
Will correct them soon

[Indianreader]

Here is the corrected chapter 19
25'56"

[Indianreader]

Here is the corrected chapter 19
25'56"
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_19_crofts_128.mp3
Thank you

[mleigh]

Here is the corrected chapter 19
25'56"
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/inspectorfrench_19_crofts_128.mp3
Thank you

PL OK for this last piece.

M