[COMPLETE] The Temple by George Herbert - kaz

pmessina · Post by **pmessina** » December 4th, 2022, 7:14 am

Dear Alan,

link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_022_herbert_128kb.mp3
duration: 02:14

Paula

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 4th, 2022, 12:01 pm

pmessina wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 7:14 am Dear Alan,
link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_022_herbert_128kb.mp3
duration: 02:14
Paula

Thanks Paula, this is Ready for PL!

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 7th, 2022, 1:38 am

pmessina wrote: ↑December 4th, 2022, 7:14 am Dear Alan,
link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_022_herbert_128kb.mp3
duration: 02:14
Paula

Section 22 is PL OK!

pmessina · Post by **pmessina** » December 7th, 2022, 5:13 pm

Hi, Alan,

Here's the last of my submissions.

Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_056_herbert_128kb.mp3
Duration: 02:25

Merry Christmas.

Paula

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 7th, 2022, 6:34 pm

pmessina wrote: ↑December 7th, 2022, 5:13 pm Hi, Alan,
Here's the last of my submissions.
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_056_herbert_128kb.mp3
Duration: 02:25
Merry Christmas.
Paula

Thanks Paula, Ready for PL!

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » December 7th, 2022, 7:29 pm

Here is #41:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_041_herbert_128kb.mp3
1:22

Thanks,

M

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 8th, 2022, 3:31 am

pmessina wrote: ↑December 7th, 2022, 5:13 pm Hi, Alan,
Here's the last of my submissions.
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_056_herbert_128kb.mp3
Duration: 02:25
Merry Christmas.
Paula

Thanks Paula, this is PL OK!

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 8th, 2022, 3:33 am

mleigh wrote: ↑December 7th, 2022, 7:29 pm Here is #41:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_041_herbert_128kb.mp3
1:22
Thanks,
M

Thanks, this is PL OK!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » December 12th, 2022, 1:07 pm

Just recorded my sections and will edit later, but they are short.
May I also read Section 4, Sacrifice?

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 12th, 2022, 1:46 pm

silverquill wrote: ↑December 12th, 2022, 1:07 pm Just recorded my sections and will edit later, but they are short.
May I also read Section 4, Sacrifice?

Thanks Larry, I have put you in for section 4

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » December 13th, 2022, 2:45 pm

Here are my short ones:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_008_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_009_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:38
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_010_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_011_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_012_herbert_128kb.mp3 2:15

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 14th, 2022, 6:40 am

silverquill wrote: ↑December 13th, 2022, 2:45 pm Here are my short ones:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_008_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_009_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:38
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_010_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_011_herbert_128kb.mp3 1:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/thetemple_012_herbert_128kb.mp3 2:15

All PL OK!

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 14th, 2022, 10:48 pm

Alan, shall I try Section 1? If so, how would you like it read? That is, with section numbers read aloud? And what shall we do about the 'table of contents'?

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » December 14th, 2022, 11:26 pm

KevinS wrote: ↑December 14th, 2022, 10:48 pm Alan, shall I try Section 1? If so, how would you like it read? That is, with section numbers read aloud? And what shall we do about the 'table of contents'?

Hi Kevin
Many thanks for taking this one, it is the longest in the collection

My preference would be that the verse numbers should not be read aloud as I think this interrupts the flow and rhythm of the poem.
Also I would prefer not to include the list of verses at the beginning. On the page it is obvious what this is and a reader can skip past it but in an audio reading it might confuse listeners.
So my feeling is no to both but if you want to include either I will accept whatever you do.
Incidentally there is a recording of this poem in the catalogue which runs to 24 minutes.
Good Luck

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 15th, 2022, 12:04 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑December 14th, 2022, 11:26 pm
KevinS wrote: ↑December 14th, 2022, 10:48 pm Alan, shall I try Section 1? If so, how would you like it read? That is, with section numbers read aloud? And what shall we do about the 'table of contents'?
Hi Kevin
Many thanks for taking this one, it is the longest in the collection
My preference would be that the verse numbers should not be read aloud as I think this interrupts the flow and rhythm of the poem.
Also I would prefer not to include the list of verses at the beginning. On the page it is obvious what this is and a reader can skip past it but in an audio reading it might confuse listeners.
So my feeling is no to both but if you want to include either I will accept whatever you do.
Incidentally there is a recording of this poem in the catalogue which runs to 24 minutes. then.
Good Luck

Thank you. I've done a first run through and have included everything, but will get working at the poem's phrasing and can edit out the 'dross.'