Oh Mrs. Hutchins is wonderful! Love your portrayal!! Chapters 7 and 12 are straight PL-OK!
Chapter 14 Note:
Missing last line: "but he belongs to a very old family in his own country - a noble family. He ought to have the best there is in the house."
jennlea wrote: ↑September 28th, 2022, 2:10 pmChapter 23 Note:
Missing his first line: "Serves him right for his temper!"
Chapter 29 Note:
0:08- heard "to Mr. Thornburn's birthday being beyond his control!"; text reads "to Mr. Thoburn's birthday being beyond his control!" (although I must admit I keep reading his name as Thornburn when I'm recording my narration )
Missing the last line- "Hot butter blue beans, please come to supper!"
Jenn,
I rerecorded the two sections with the problems. Sometimes it is hard for me to recreate a voice after so long in a way I am pleased with and I am not really pleased with these two. But as I read 'my' lines in these two Chapters I saw that in both cases it was just a random person saying them, rather than specifically Mr. Jennings. I could easily rerecord the few lines in these two Chapters, each with a different voice so that Mr. Jennings doesn't sound like a completely different person. Just let me know and I will do it.
Wayne
Hi Wayne! I'm sure what you re-recorded sounds just fine, though I understand and sympathize with how hard it can be to recreate the voices we choose to do for our characters. I'll leave it up to you on what you'd like to do with those two lines, I want you to be happy with your work.
jennlea wrote: ↑September 28th, 2022, 2:10 pmChapter 23 Note:
Missing his first line: "Serves him right for his temper!"
Chapter 29 Note:
0:08- heard "to Mr. Thornburn's birthday being beyond his control!"; text reads "to Mr. Thoburn's birthday being beyond his control!" (although I must admit I keep reading his name as Thornburn when I'm recording my narration )
Missing the last line- "Hot butter blue beans, please come to supper!"
Jenn,
I rerecorded the two sections with the problems. Sometimes it is hard for me to recreate a voice after so long in a way I am pleased with and I am not really pleased with these two. But as I read 'my' lines in these two Chapters I saw that in both cases it was just a random person saying them, rather than specifically Mr. Jennings. I could easily rerecord the few lines in these two Chapters, each with a different voice so that Mr. Jennings doesn't sound like a completely different person. Just let me know and I will do it.
Wayne
Hi Wayne! I'm sure what you re-recorded sounds just fine, though I understand and sympathize with how hard it can be to recreate the voices we choose to do for our characters. I'll leave it up to you on what you'd like to do with those two lines, I want you to be happy with your work.
Jenn,
Here are corrected Chapters 23 and 29 for Mr. Jennings and the unnamed speaker.
The last line, about the beans, seems to be an unnamed character, so I did it in a slightly different voice. It is at the end of Chapter 29, so you can do with it what you want.
Here are corrected Chapters 23 and 29 for Mr. Jennings and the unnamed speaker.
The last line, about the beans, seems to be an unnamed character, so I did it in a slightly different voice. It is at the end of Chapter 29, so you can do with it what you want.
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