[COMPLETE]Canada in War-Paint, by Ralph W. Bell - tg

[WinterMoon]

Here is Section 16

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_16_bell_128kb.mp3

Thank you. This is queued for PL.

Just a reminder - please include the length of your section when you post future ones. Thanks.

Oh! I knew I had forgotten something... I'm sorry!

[Beeswaxcandle]

Here is Section 16

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_16_bell_128kb.mp3

00:49 I hear “who did not go into”; text has “who did go into”
01:09 “of a” repeated (easy to have the mouse slip when doing an edit)
01:39 I hear “having cosigned” instead of “consigned”
02:41 I hear “Mo-ey de Chandon” instead of “M'wet et Chandon”.
The important thing here is the middle word, de implies possession, while et is "and". On a side note, although Moët looks like a French word, it's actually a Dutch name. As a result the company pronounces itself with the Dutch word. This bit is less important to fix and is optional as people will still know what you mean.

[WinterMoon]

Here is Section 16

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_16_bell_128kb.mp3

00:49 I hear “who did not go into”; text has “who did go into”
01:09 “of a” repeated (easy to have the mouse slip when doing an edit)
01:39 I hear “having cosigned” instead of “consigned”
02:41 I hear “Mo-ey de Chandon” instead of “M'wet et Chandon”.
The important thing here is the middle word, de implies possession, while et is "and". On a side note, although Moët looks like a French word, it's actually a Dutch name. As a result the company pronounces itself with the Dutch word. This bit is less important to fix and is optional as people will still know what you mean.

Okay thank you! I will get these done as soon as I can.

[Lmnei]

Hi there -

Here are some corrections -

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_26_bell_128kb.mp3 - 10:13
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_27_bell_128kb.mp3 - 7:49

Some new recordings:

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_28_bell_128kb.mp3 9.46 MB - 9:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_29_bell_128kb.mp3 8.27 MB - 8:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_30_bell_128kb.mp3 9.06 MB - 9:26

I have laryngitis and so I was able to do the 3 recordings this week but I need to rest my voice now.... Just 2 more to go!

Lynda

[Beeswaxcandle]

Hi there -

Here are some corrections -

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_26_bell_128kb.mp3 - 10:13
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_27_bell_128kb.mp3 - 7:49

Some new recordings:

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_28_bell_128kb.mp3 9.46 MB - 9:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_29_bell_128kb.mp3 8.27 MB - 8:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_30_bell_128kb.mp3 9.06 MB - 9:26

I have laryngitis and so I was able to do the 3 recordings this week but I need to rest my voice now.... Just 2 more to go!

Lynda

I'm sorry to hear of the laryngitis. Please take care not to push your voice, as there's no rush.

26, 27, 28 PL Okay

Section 29
01:14 repetition of “though nothing to the battle” (this is the point of the first instance)

Section 30
00:38 repetition of “one of these bright” (this is the point of the first instance)
02:34 & 08:53 I hear “coy”, the text has “Coy.” i.e. Company
04:49 editing problem for “impassioned”; I hear “im-impassioned”
05:32 I hear “silly night”; text has “stilly night”
07:37 I hear “Adjunct”; text has “Adjutant”
09:04 I hear “painted surprise; text has “pained surprise”
09:08 editing problem for "Adjutant"; I hear “a-adjutant”

[Lmnei]

Section 29
01:14 repetition of “though nothing to the battle” (this is the point of the first instance)

Section 30
00:38 repetition of “one of these bright” (this is the point of the first instance)
02:34 & 08:53 I hear “coy”, the text has “Coy.” i.e. Company
04:49 editing problem for “impassioned”; I hear “im-impassioned”
05:32 I hear “silly night”; text has “stilly night”
07:37 I hear “Adjunct”; text has “Adjutant”
09:04 I hear “painted surprise; text has “pained surprise”
09:08 editing problem for "Adjutant"; I hear “a-adjutant”

Hi there - I have done most of these changes. This book is a Standard PL. Some of these edits requested are getting pretty close to a Perfect PL feedback. You are doing a good job however some of these "details" are a bit detailed and can come down to accent (silly vs. stilly) The following I did not complete for the reasons listed:

02:34 & 08:53 I hear “coy”, the text has “Coy.” i.e. Company (never heard of that abbreviation after 3000 readings, searched book and did not find it, I read what it said which was the abbreviation.)
04:49 editing problem for “impassioned”; I hear “im-impassioned” I think that is just my voice as I cannot hear it,

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_29_bell_128kb.mp3 - 8:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_30_bell_128kb.mp3 - 9:23

Lynda

[Beeswaxcandle]

Hi there - I have done most of these changes. This book is a Standard PL. Some of these edits requested are getting pretty close to a Perfect PL feedback. You are doing a good job however some of these "details" are a bit detailed and can come down to accent (silly vs. stilly) The following I did not complete for the reasons listed:

02:34 & 08:53 I hear “coy”, the text has “Coy.” i.e. Company (never heard of that abbreviation after 3000 readings, searched book and did not find it, I read what it said which was the abbreviation.)
04:49 editing problem for “impassioned”; I hear “im-impassioned” I think that is just my voice as I cannot hear it,

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_29_bell_128kb.mp3 - 8:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_30_bell_128kb.mp3 - 9:23

Lynda

Both marked as PL okay.

I will just note that other readers in this work have automatically read "Company" for "Coy." when it has appeared in other sections.

In respect of the comment about details, I come from a Wikisource background where the details are essential as we aim to reproduce the text exactly as it was published. In my RL profession as a nosologist, completely accurate data is the goal at all times.

At the same time, I recognise that perfect is rarely possible here—faults in the original text and in the transcription don't help—and I know that I have stumbles and do word transpositions in my own readings. I'm not noting every little deviation from the text, but only flagging the kinds of things that have been flagged to me—missed edits, words that change the meaning of the text, and those that make it confusing to the hearer.

[TriciaG]

At the same time, I recognise that perfect is rarely possible here—faults in the original text and in the transcription don't help—and I know that I have stumbles and do word transpositions in my own readings. I'm not noting every little deviation from the text, but only flagging the kinds of things that have been flagged to me—missed edits, words that change the meaning of the text, and those that make it confusing to the hearer.

Which, for the record, are not part of "standard" PL (except the missed edits, which are). If the BC wanted that, they'd need to mark the PL type as "special" and note the types of things you mention. If someone flagged you on them on Standard PL projects, they were also going beyond the written guidelines.

[WinterMoon]

Section 17!



https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3


7:01

[WinterMoon]

Section 18: 6:05


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_18_bell_128kb.mp3

[Beeswaxcandle]

Section 17!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3

7:01

02:34 Extra word. I hear "Minnie reminds me one of ..." The me is not in the text.

[Beeswaxcandle]

Section 18: 6:05


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_18_bell_128kb.mp3

PL Okay

[WinterMoon]

Section 17!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3

7:01

02:34 Extra word. I hear "Minnie reminds me one of ..." The me is not in the text.

Updated!


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3

[Beeswaxcandle]

Section 17!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3

7:01

02:34 Extra word. I hear "Minnie reminds me one of ..." The me is not in the text.

Updated!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_17_bell_128kb.mp3

Spot PL okay

[WinterMoon]

Here is Section 16

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_16_bell_128kb.mp3

00:49 I hear “who did not go into”; text has “who did go into”
01:09 “of a” repeated (easy to have the mouse slip when doing an edit)
01:39 I hear “having cosigned” instead of “consigned”
02:41 I hear “Mo-ey de Chandon” instead of “M'wet et Chandon”.
The important thing here is the middle word, de implies possession, while et is "and". On a side note, although Moët looks like a French word, it's actually a Dutch name. As a result the company pronounces itself with the Dutch word. This bit is less important to fix and is optional as people will still know what you mean.

Okay thank you! I will get these done as soon as I can.

Here is the update and edits!


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/canadainwarpaint_16_bell_128kb.mp3